Very true! Write more!

This was so poetic! And so deep! Shii and Aki make a wonderful couple, and the imagery was so very effective. I liked the way you described their feelings as the steps of a dance, and remembered that each had hurt or betrayed the other in their relationship, but at the end, showed that they were in love. *bursts into tears* Uwaah! *sobs with envy* *faves*

This does sound like Shigure and Akito. Very nice.

Aww~ Yay for Akito x Shi-chan!

once again... you rock, and i suck. that's really cool. i'm a big akigure shipper, so that made me very happy. it really fits the relationship too. it's so perfect...

Beautiful.

Short, but deep, truly, and sorrow, you're cool!