Oh man I can barely keep the plot twists straight and this universe is stressing me out, but I still love it so much! Poor Usagi! And I think I’m about to lose in over Kenji’s irresponsibility, as much as the family has to break up for the sake of the teens. I do definitely wonder who bungled the timeline and if it was malicious or accidental. Interesting stuff!

It occurs to me that the woman in America could very well be someone like Setsuna, trying to intervene to break up the marriage so Usagi and Mamo could actually have a shot at being together without so many complications, especially since the timeline (and her knowledge of it) isn’t linear. That would be an interesting plot turn if you took it that way!

I enjoyed SO much about this chapter. Kabooooom went all the feelings. Now the Senshi know, and Motoki knows, Mamo knows and is freaking, and who knows where Usa’s head is. Lots of dominos set up to fall and I can’t wait!

Ah I see what you meant about personality changes as the past life influence takes over their brainwaves a bit. I wasn’t really seeing the contrast but it’s becoming more apparent. I can’t wait to see what the surprise is - all my guesses are dirty and probably inaccurate XD

Kenji, you cheating dog! I’m weirdly glad Mamo was standing up for his step family when he found out, but this is not going to end well. Uuuugh. Poor Usagi clearly also needs to be transformed for awhile so she can actually heal.

Oh man that’s the real strain isn’t it? Them trying to reconcile their subconscious feelings and desires from their past life with their current life status as siblings and having their heads explode with the awkward XD

The plot keeps getting more interesting and twistier! I’m really eager to see where this goes next and when Mamo figures out the secret, as well as how the whole past lives thing manifests and what Serenity is worried about. Fascinating choices you’re making, creatively!

OH I WAS SO HOPING THE HAIR COLOR WOULD GO DOWN LIKE THIS! Busted, Mamo! And the migraine thing was an interesting side tidbit I wasn’t expecting - creative side effect choice!

We will suspend disbelief on the plausibility of any hair mousse being permanent enough to color black hair and not instantly wash out with bleaching action, because it was still totally adorable AND steamy XD

That was a fun chapter and things are heating up indeed!

Oooh, the spanking imagery was a little hot under the collar - naughty Mamo XD

They’re in such denial, this is going to go so gloriously badly!

I admit I absolutely am loving the premise in a very guilty pleasure sort of way. Having your OTP live under the same roof and be step siblings is so socially unacceptable, but so right, too XD. I feel a little naughty for loving it!

The ‘war’ aspect is fun too, as the competitive nature and hormones fight one another and come out delightfully. But transforming superheroes under the same roof?! GENIUS! And so much harder to hide both from the parents AND one another. Everything is set up to fall in so many horrible and spectacular ways and I’m absolutely thrilled to read more. Great start!

Will you please update it’s well over due

Update, please!

Congrats!

can U please finish (a kiss in the dark) I would REALLY like to know the end! PLEASE AND THANK YOU!

CAN U PLEASE FINISH (A KISS IN THE DARK) I REALLY WANT TO KNOW THE END! PLEASE AND THANK YOU!