great one shot

This was a excellent one shot. I love how you explain every detail between the battle. Ever emotion and feelings were added. I also loved they you explain Yuri dreams to her future. And how you compared her to her parents. NaruSaku forever

Great job on this story, hope you make a sequel about their daughter.

Great story its beautiful.

Beautiful story.

I think it a great story i like the fact that they help each other out in this story but also chivalry is the best

that was really well written. you should do more like that

this story was really beautiful and very descritpive

i really love this story

Wow this is an awesome one-shot this will go into my favorites.

that was amazing! honestly, this is the best one-shot i've ever read. i really enjoyed it. thank you for writing this.

It's interesting how you noted that Naruto had a "talent" for controlling, starting, and maintaining fires, as the Kyuubi is the Bijuu of Fire, Fire Incarnate, just as Shukaku is sand and the Wind element incarnate. Nobody realizes that, as long as Kyuubi is sealed inside him, Naruto has TWO elemental affinities, his own (Wind) and Kyuubi's (Fire), which ironically "trumps" Wind (Fire beats Wind, Wind beats Lightning, Lightning beats Earth, Earth beats Water, Water beats Fire).

Awesome one shot.

Description in this story was absolutely terrific. I could read the passion you put into all of the words and Naruto and Sakura's love was so believable to read.

Fun read.

This was a nice one-shot. Thanks for sharing.

Best,

~JohnnyG

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Brilliant! Masterfully written and great flow. Perfect 1 shot. Nothing felt rushed. Everything felt right. Excellent story.

Nice man seriously. You deserve more than 11 reviews. It was excellent. What made your story better was the way you went into detail. I love the effort.