| Reviews for Heartlines |
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LOTRLE chapter 34 . 7/28 1. Continue writing conversations between Lothy and Beorn. But do include his perspective. For up until now, there is almost same conclusions between Eomer/Rohan side and that of Gondor/Aragorn. Beorn’s perspective would shed light on why there is such hate and distrust between Rohan and Dunlendings |
ro781727 chapter 27 . 6/20 Treebeard and the Ents live in Isengard, they’d slaughter the Dunlendings (due to their past alliance with Saruman) |
meldisil chapter 36 . 8/7/2016 I fall in love with this story again and again! |
Anon chapter 23 . 6/7/2016 I really enjoy this story. I like the slowly building trust and love. |
Anon chapter 11 . 6/7/2016 A good lemon. Congratulations! |
Anon chapter 10 . 6/7/2016 A very good story! |
Anon chapter 2 . 6/7/2016 I'm really heartbroken that they had no chance to talk before the wedding even a little bit |
WhiteRoseQueen chapter 36 . 5/2/2014 Amazing story! Can't wait for more Eomer/ loth action a well as scenes with Beorn. |
team.K.putt chapter 36 . 1/11/2014 Please tell me he will go back soon! :) |
lynnelay chapter 36 . 11/6/2013 Im really enjoying your story. I'm looking forward to you updating soon |
Covered in Bruises chapter 34 . 11/1/2013 Please go no more "banter" between the two because it isn't really banter. Its Beorn being a giant douche bag and Lothiriel being both a crap Queen and more than a bit of an idiot. Does she really think that Everyone in Edoras doesn't know the Queen is personally "treating" a Dunlending prisoner? One already guilty of the capital crime of kidnapping the Queen? Does she think they aren't laughing at their King being cuckolded by his new Queen? Yes we know thats wrong, well kind of wrong because by treating Beorn she really is betraying Eomer, but the peopel of Edoeras only know what they see and what rumor tells and that its going to look very bad. I fact she has to know its so stupid because she does it "in disguise" When you add in that no matter what the danger is the Dunlendings are so poorly armed, so few in number and so poorly trained that they would only be detriment to Rohan in fighting there is nothing to be gained from her actions. Really dislike the Queen of Rohan right now, |
Lothmer chapter 17 . 9/10/2013 Please please please never stop writing! This story is absolutely lovely! |
shana1 chapter 36 . 7/20/2013 Just thought I would remind you that your avid readers await your next update! I absolutely love this story! Life happens of course but I would to read more :-) |
marinelli chapter 2 . 7/10/2013 It's actually not that easy to get pregnant. It's rare, for one time to do it. About 4 to 6 months of sex at the fertile time, it actually what it takes. That's average. Of course there are those people who get pregnant after one time. (it's rare) |
Guest chapter 36 . 3/12/2013 Update? Please? This is too good to just let it go. Really I am incredibly disappointed that this tale has never been finished and it has been so very long since you updated. :-(. Please please please? |