Very well done, thank you so much!

Very sad...

Oh dang, that was sad. But very well written, I love how you came at all of this from John's pov.

Awwww, wee Dean breaks my heart here and John, too! So sad and perfect. Loved it :)

Poor John, Dean did learn to cry for Daddy but I'm sure it did take a while.

awww...cute

Oh wow. That was beyond brilliant. I cried.

Good job..

make me cry...

but so sweet.

That was heartbreaking. Poor baby Dean. It makes you wish to take on the illness yourself just so he'd feel better. *hugs him*

aww this was heartbreaking but completely sweet. i love pre-series! good job!

carrie

Aw, so sad and touching. You're great with those awefully sad family stories.

Thanks for this beautiful ficlet.

LOVED those lines:

Brightening when he sees John, his eyes brimming with tears. He holds out his arms, one dangling an IV line like some kind of ground tie, and John thinks, Call for ME, say "Daddy" just once, Dean, please just say it, but Dean's lips are tightly closed.

[...]places his hand on Dean's where it lies curled like a tired anemone on the mattress.

[...] Dean touches the dents and smiles silently.

Beautiful - thank you!

Take care. D.

Oh my God this was sweet and sad and painful and touching and everything a good Wee!chester should be!

Thanks for writing it!

Aww aww just...aw

I never read a very wee weechester fic, but I liked yours very much. John is a complicated man I think you portrayed him very well and realistic. Great job

*sniffles*

I wasn't even half way through when I started crying. it's so heartbreaking! and sad! and full of win.

Aw, cute _