I hope you made a sequel to this story.

I am slowly going through your stories..this one is fantastic! I love John being special and I also think his going to Atlantis was his destiny...gaining super powers is a big plus, especially for all the problems they face in the Pegasus Galaxy! Too bad I just founds this...probably leaving a worthless review as it looks like you gave up writing a few years ago!

Very strange story - reminded me a bit of the SG-1 episode where Daniel is diagnosed as schizophrenic. Still, very well-written and enjoyable.

Great story - room for a sequel? (hint)

Cool story

Wow, what an intriguing story. I loved McKay in this, and was so frustrated, right along with John. I imagine John is going to come into some conflict because he's not omnipotent, and he can't save everybody. People are probably going to feel betrayed and bitter about who he saves and who he doesn't. But that's depressing. I like how the fic ended on a happier note. Thanks for sharing. And just in case you decide to add on the story, I'm gonna put the story on my alert list ;)

that was a cool story now you just need to do another part with john coming into some more of his knew powers and marius and john meeting somehow:)

I absolutely loved this. Great story, lovely ending with John being an Ancient and all.

Will you be writing a sequel? I'm sure it'd be just a great as this! And so many things to happen in the future! You're killing me! XD

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Cool. The SGA writers really need to get on the ball with doing more concerning John's gene. Fanfic writers are kicking their butts in that aspect.

You "have the touch". And nice way of adding Teyla in here. Interesting. Loved it of course. ;)

Great story. Very intriguing premise and I had fun trying to figure out what was happening before you explained it...not that I managed.

You did a great job with John's ordeal as he struggled against thoughts and memories that weren't his, as well as having to deal with people thinking he was going crazy or suffering PTSD. Seeing it from John's pov gave great insight into how confused and scary it was. I loved how the team rallied round, how Ronon and Teyla were there to stop him getting away, how Rodney worked flat out to dig up any useful information. I was a little displeased that Elizabeth refused to let Rodney go back to examine the chair, but it turned out ok, so I'll let her off ;).

An interesting ending too, with John healing Teyla and then having a chat with Marius and learning that he's basically an Ancient! I'd love to see what other powers he gains as time goes by. And what of his meeting with Marius?

Great story.

Wow. So. Friggin'. Cool.

Epic, really.

Bet Rodney's kinda jealous that John gets to do this naturally, eh? ;)

"Great, now I'm the superhero's sidekick."

"You were always the sidekick, Rodney. Unless you'd rather be the insane evil genius, whose ass I kick on a regular basis."

"Wait, so there's a difference between the two?"

*snicker*

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Fun one there Merlin. Yes, they haven't played up his access to technology in a while. I like the supposition about his Ancientyness. Chaya said they were more alike than he knew...hope you can follow this one up sometime. Would like to see his journey!

Wo ho! Awesome story!

Wow! Just read this and wow again! I am so pleased to read a story about Shep being special and having a connection with the Ancients! Ok, being an Ancient! LOL! This makes up for Sheppard not getting an episode about his special gene! I loved the whump and the end line was really sort of - well, it made me feel all shivery! Excellent stuff. Thanks for sharing! :) P.S. Where my story? Pretty please! :)