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The second part of this chapter, where it starts "a beautiful crimson nebula..." I have read this before verbatium from another reader, Stupid Major. He/She wrote a story called Beyond the Stars. The Second Chapter: Regaining Yesterday, Part One, where it starts FOUR DAYS LATER is EXACTLY the same lines as yours.

I like the both of you stories, but I am concerned about plagerism. I dont want to cause trouble, but I thought you should had the right to know. Below is the link to Chapter 2 of Stupid Majors BEYOND THE STARS. It's a great piece, as I said, and Amaya was brilliantly written too; however, I just thought it was odd that both stories have the same lines as the other.

Thanks again for such great works of fiction.

Collegegirl205

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I am sure you hear this all the time, but I wanted to tell you myself. Your characterization of all the Voyager character is 'spot on' (at the risk of sounding British). I just wanted to tell you that I can actually imagine each character saying and doing these things. That is VERY hard to do and I congratulate you. I wouldn't mind some help like that for my stories! :) I encourage you to keep writing if not on this story than on new ones.

“Go right ahead,” he said and backed away. Kathryn slowly approached the girl and squatted down to her size. They young girl, sensing a presence, raised her head and back further into the wall.

‘I hope this works,” Kathryn thought and held up her hands.

“Hello. Do not be afraid, we will not harm you. I am Kathryn Janeway. What is your name?” Kathryn easily signed to the girl.

The girl made no sign of understanding, but after a few minutes, the girl replied, “Amaya.”

If Janeway's going to develop amazing abilities and alien orphans are going to start signing in ASL, then where is canon? Canon, are you anywhere? Why can she do that?

I absolutely love,love, LOVE, this fiction but then again I love all JetC fanfiction especially baby fic. I love the name you picked Amaya it's very beautiful. I hope you will write more again sometime.

PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY!THE FAMILY EXPANSION IS WORTH EXPLORING. I WONDER IF AMAYA DEVELOPS POWERS. DON'T STOP WRITING. I WOULD LOVE TO WRITE BUT IDEAS ARE JUST THAT. STORIES DON'T FLOW. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK

Love it! Awsome story! Great job! Excillent story! Lol Great job!

Aw, I love the last chapter. Having trouble with the 'delighted yell,' but I'm having fun guessing what it would look like. The whole story's so cute!

YAY! HAPPY THOUGHTS! I like this story! You should write a sequel...

Cute!

aww that was cute. Can you say SEQUAL please?

well i love kathryn's pregnant stories so i'm interested in what else you have to offer, but some parts of the story seem out of character and it just feels like it's being rushed.

Very nice, I cant wait to see where this goes.

well you might be rushing it just a tab, i'm sorry this chapter is so short. i love stories with j/c and children, it shows different sides of them that i love to see. good job, update soon.

this sounds interesting. throw some spice in it...like a prison camp and broken hearts!

please update soon!