Reviews for Competition
Little mouse chapter 1 . 6/5/2015
hahahaha, Cant stop laughing
Scarlet Amaranth chapter 1 . 5/19/2007
Franklin vs Feitan XD XD XD

So that's how the Genei Ryodan came up with the chart huh o
Ame Mika'zuki chapter 1 . 1/22/2007
*laughs* That was HILARIOUS~. I seriously love it. And HECK SLAP IT ON FEITAN'S FACE THAT HE'S SHORT! XD *hysterical laughter* Ah, ah I'm so sorry, that part with Feitan and Franklin... 'sjust too funny. XD

Uhm just the tiniest bits of corrections: "Come one" - Come on, "..get this matter settles" - get this matter settled.

"Uvogin and Finks snarled, pointing at each other as they shouted in almost perfect unison, proof of the Ryodan’s excellent, if deadly, skills at working together, even unintentionally."-I love that line. :D
Ging Freecs chapter 1 . 1/11/2007
Very um... interesting...? It was a buit choppy, and the punch line (if there was one) could use a little work, but it was pretty enjoyable XD
Azamiko chapter 1 . 1/8/2007
*grin* It never occurred to me to wonder about how they came up with the rankings...
onskidrow chapter 1 . 1/7/2007
Ha! Amusing! Fun to see a more light-hearted and bickering Ryodan.