Update update update! U must continue and update soon! This is just too good of a story! :)

Read your story. Loved it. Fingers crossed for more. ;)

Hey there. So I know it's been forever since you updated this fic and you probably don't remember its existence anymore, but I had a few things I wanted to say.
First off, I like most YYHHP crossovers. I like yours too. You pass. Nice grammar and spelling, good enough descriptions, good coherency.
However, one thing is bugging me big time: your ideas of everything Japanese. If it were me and I was writing something about a culture that is not my own, I would do some research before putting down whatever was in my head. The way you made the three from YYH pronounce English names is way off. That's, I suppose, understandable seeing as it's not easy imitating an accent. I would be happy to help you write it more credibly if you want.
But the using a fork thing, not even knowing what it is? Please. Japanese people do have western cuisine and restaurants in Japan, they KNOW what silverware is AND how to use it.
Also, Cho Chang? Not a Japanese name. You could maybe pass it off as her being half-and-half: her dad Chinese and her mom Japanese or something.

Last thing, though this is more a matter of opinion. Kurama is the top student at his school. Japanese schools teach English. Logically he would have aced the class just like everything else, so it's a wonder to me that he couldn't speak even a word of English, or couldn't get the pronunciation down. Well. Since it's not mentioned in the series if he speaks English or not I can't really say you're wrong.

Otherwise, like I mentioned, I like your style of writing and the general neatness of it, it's easy to read and to like. Just had to get this off my chest because it's sort of keeping me from enjoying the story fully.

that was wonderful :D

Why is it that all great Yu Yu Hakasho crossovers appear to be dead?

This is a very good story. If posable, please continue the story. I like the plot.

UPDATE! There are hardly any good HP crossovers and this happens to be one of them!

Well, this was an interesting and well-executed crossover. Is it dead?

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I'll alert it anyway, just in case.

I simply adore your humore. I can't wait for the next chapter.

um, from what i remember Hallows Eve wasn't about driving evil spirtis away, but recogizing and honoring the spirits of past loved ones and ancestors. Aka, Samhain. "These Halloween origins are a time in which Druidism and Celtic Reconstructionists celebrate Samhain as a feast for the dead. Divination and fortune telling is believed to have better communication with the spirit world because the fall season holds the thinnest partition between the two worlds of the living and the dead. The Druids built huge sacred bonfires to offer sacrifices to the many Celtic deities that number over five hundred named gods. Before each yearly sacred bonfire, the Celts would extinguish their hearth fires and relight them with embers from the bonfire"

Please update soon.

This is a good story .

(I hope that it's not discontinued DX)

Love it!

I like this story. I hope you are planning to update again soon! ;) I can't wait to read more!

-Gothic Lust

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...I tried to type you a sno-cap. Did it work? :(

I'm really enjoying this story! The little tidbits with Neville and Youko are my favorites, I think... Can't wait to read the next chapter!