Ah, I've read this like years ago, and I've only just reread the whole thing again. I must say it's still one of the most memorable fics I have ever read. The amount of detail and character introspection, not to mention just the writing itself was so wonderful. I'm so glad to have ever come across this story. Very beautiful, and it's quite an inspiration to me. :D

I have to say, this is one of the best Atobe character studies I've ever read. It's also a really touching romance. Good work! :)

I was gonna give up on this story reading so much angst bbut ,it's so much reality, and it's bitter sweet that the most fruitful endings,happiness and joy come from ,pain and sour experiences I couldn't put this story down until the last chapter ,it's crazy but this has been one of the biggest reality checks Ithink I'll ever get.
#perfection ,there should be part two,three, four etc...

I just found this story and I love it! I luv this pairing tango,;)

Beautiful. That is all I have to say. I'm speechless...

I wonder if I should say Sanada's side of the story for the last entry...

I really like how you did this story. You actualy went deeper in to Atobe and persented him with a personality and gave him the maskes that he actualy keeps.

Good job,

Mentaly Insane.

Just sat down and read this through in one go this afternoon (couldn't 'put it down'!) and it was absolutely lovely. You both have an uncanny ability as co-writers to create such deep and heartwarming characters and the journal entry approach was creative and /very/ well done. Bravo! Thank you for sharing this beautiful story.

amazing :) nice descriptions and development, very well done :) I loved it!

I'm not one who reads Tango Pair fics often, but I'm so glad I took the time to read this one. The characterization of all the characters was amazingly well done and the plot seems so believable that I can imagine this fic being canon xD

In truth, I was thinking of how Atobe's and Sanada's writing would be like if they kept journals, and it's easy to think that both of your writing was really theirs. Sanada's entries weren't too wordy, but it was enough to let readers see his personality through it. Atobe's entries seemed so much like him, as he'd be someone who would really try to write as much as he could without going completely over the top.

(And personally, seeing Yukimura and Tezuka paired up together made me really happy~ I'm usually one who prefers reading Perfect Pair fics so when I read that Fuji went with Taka, I was a bit sad but Yukimura and Tezuka are also an awesome couple~)

While I love this fic what with its amazing characterization and plot, I'd noticed that in Atobe's entry, the date in Japanese (minus the characters) is 3.14 but the one under it says 'Wednesday, February 14th'

It's not that huge a detail, it just made me double check xD

Hey,

I only have one thing to say. Both of you have converted me into believing in this pairing. Apart from the wonderful plot line, I like the journal styled first person entries. They're helpful in conveying the emotion of the character especially a cold one like Sanada. I'm amazed that you could write the events so well in first person, that takes some serious amount of skill. At least in my , I'm going to go ahead and fins more AtoSana fics out there.

So much to read, so little time...

Himalia

I really love this fic and how wonderfully you girls portrayed SanaAto's relationship. The evolution from mutual dislike to love was really possibly the most adorable thing I've ever read. I had the biggest smile on my face everytime SanaAto interacted with each other; they are just so cute XD

Anyway, I just loved this and hope you write some more fic about Tango pair later on 3

This has got to be one of my favorite Tango fics ever. I've read it at least three times, and always find myself finding things I've missed in the prior reading. Anyway, since I can't form a coherant thought right now, and my spelling is just as bad, I'd just wanted to say, that I love this fic.

I love the story. I love Sanada. I love Atobe. Even I love Yukimura here *though he's cruel in some previous chapter, but in the end, he did it for Gen-chan TT*

I usually love Alpha. But this fic made me love Tango, too. They are pretty much in character. *not sure about Tezuka and his hormones issue, though XDD*

Hyotei boys are amazing. Kabaji and Jirou being such good friends. I love their interaction with Kei-chan. Rikkai... well, they don't get enough spot. It's difficult when you have buchou and fukubuchou in such a problem.

Renji and Yuushi... hmm...that's why they were called genius XD

Loved it

OMG, this story is absolutely fantastic. I've been reading it nonstop, and I fell in love with it. I love how you wrote Sanada and Atobe. Yukimura and Tezuka were great as well. I've never seen that story before. I love how Sanada and Atobe's relationship grew gradually and so realistically. I felt like crying at some points. Great job!

This story, overall, is written so beautifully, I couldn't find words to express how I felt throughout the whole story. Everything was strung perfectly, everything explained itself. And, the way how you two depict Sanada and Atobe is just, beautiful.