| Reviews for Second to None |
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Too ambiguous chapter 2 . 5/18/2018 I hate a wishy washy woman. And no matter how you paint your story, you've made Naruto a pitiful second. That's just not the Naruto I've come to appreciate. I think I'd rather be alone forever than have the woman I love want to be with another man ... and know it. In that regard, this was kind of disgusting. |
Iron Monkey Fist chapter 2 . 10/2/2014 Beautiful. |
Iron Monkey Fist chapter 1 . 10/2/2014 This makes me feel for Naruto. |
JeiGoWAY chapter 2 . 5/16/2012 You really should continue this! :D |
Kyo12591 chapter 2 . 2/26/2010 Gah please right more! I love this story! Please? kyo |
Kyo12591 chapter 1 . 2/26/2010 oh I like this so far. I'm liking your stories though what the freak with the Sessho Kagura and the Yuri? *shivers* But great stories, other then those, no offense but I just can't stand those couples. I like this chapter it's cute and sad at the same time. I like the Mature Naruto. kyo |
moor chapter 2 . 2/1/2009 You convey their conflict so maturely, and develop it so well! |
RyokoJesse chapter 2 . 11/26/2008 bleh so sweet. and people ask me why I enjoy sasunarusaku shipping. very good work, and I appreciate Sakura's POV rather than the boys' - namely Naruto, heh. |
Itachi's apprentice chapter 2 . 7/30/2008 Please,Please,Please,continue |
Melitza chapter 2 . 5/18/2008 Very tragic, and very lovely description of the messed up triangle between them. The only question remains in the wild card - Sasuke. But I dunno. For all that I usually am a SasuSaku shipper, this one made me pull for NaruSaku. _ |
Makuta-Tobi chapter 2 . 1/3/2008 It's good. Please continue. |
NeverLookBackSamurai chapter 1 . 11/17/2007 ... But nice. Not fond of Sakura, but this is ok. |
Aaron chapter 1 . 8/1/2007 I thought that this story was very well written. I like the way you used "There is no best in her triangle, only other." at the end, it gave the story just enough closure to end it. And the way you made Sakura so unsure of herself and what she wanted was great. The sadness that Naruto carried was masterfully explained. I felt like i was Naruto there for a while and i felt like i was going to fall apart under all of it. I hope you keep writing stories especially more about Naruto, because i enjoyed this one alot. The only critisism that I have for you is that when Naruto thought "I love you" you should make it a little more obvious that he was just thinking it. It was written fine, but i would suggest just changing the font a little bit, or bolding it to make it more noticable, because I didn't catch it for a second, and i had to reread the sentence. But overall I thought you did a great job writing it. |
Emma chapter 1 . 6/30/2007 OMG! Please write more! This is so cool! This is the best NaruSaku i have EVER read! Please, please, please, please, please write some more! |
Lotos-Eater chapter 2 . 6/24/2007 Aw! I am no fan of this pairing but this WORKED. It was hot in that restrained, sad kind of way. Is there more? WILL THERE BE MORE? |