Oh, snap! Ash, you got OWNED. Nice fic.

i love this one too! o-some!

oh! ::cries::

i'm such a sucker for gymshippyness. ;)

love the mondays theme. and that ash had the whole angsty bit at the end. ::sniffles::

OMG! That was so so so so good! I practically NEVER read pokemon fics (Well, I've checked a few but they sucked) But yours was AMAZING! I loved it! You've got talent girl! ;)

I loved this story! I guess it's really unique in the way that it's talking about Mondays and stuff, and the last lines took me by like.. *WAM!* I didn't think it would be another one of those pity Ash ones cuz he didn't seem to care when they were flirting at Brock's house and over dinner, but... heh!I thought it would be a happy fic, happy ending, everyone's happy. Then you've got to make it even better by adding some ouchiness inside. boo.. haha, just kiddin. it was great!

Ouch. Some people just don't like Tracey, they can't or won't give any explanation for it, but it's a writing preference and you're free to it. And for anyone not looking past my example, I KNOW that Tracey is not the one being continuously tortured in Ciircee's writ. Regardles, your soliloquies are very good, that no matter what I'm reading I can believe it's happening to the character in the way he views it.

I just read this again even though I had read it on unintended, and I added it to my faves. _ I like it because it's sooo unique. . . although the end is kinda like a jacknife in the heart, it adds to it. _ Gymshipping forever, ne? Great fic! It had some really cool lines in it-and being a Brock POV gave it a boosted 1000 points! Woo hoo! Ehehehe. LAter!

You are an absolutely brilliant writer! The whole Monday thing as a theme was fantastic! Wow! I don't even know what else to say. This was amazing! You are definitely going on my favorites list. Author Alert, too.

Good story, I feel sorry for Ash though 'cause he won't ever have Misty.

Oooo...very good as usual! Although the end kinda confused me...oh wel! *sighs* It was still really good!

If that last part was Ash's pov I don't think he was very happy, and since I can't see anyone sad I'll have to ask you something that may or may not go against your principals:"Please make Ash happy."I just can't see the guy so sad, he may be happy for Brock and Misty, but still deep inside he wants to be that guy marrying her, so if it's not to mutch to ask of you I'd be really gratefull you gave him the same happines the others have.(I'm still going from the thought the last part was Ash"s pov, ok).And by the way, the story wasn't that bad'since I'm a very big fan of aamrn ya can't blaim me for disliking your story a little bit, can you?)But if I were to give it a honest review, I'd say it was pretty good and that's the truth

WOW! This is a good point of view story of Brock! Keep it up!