Very cute. I love that book, so does my girlfriend. Very well writen, very in charicter. :3

...wait a sec, didn't he say he hated the 14th century? not that he would like the 'death' part of it anyway; certainly reduces the number of people to tempt doesn't it?

that was just lovely.

i agree with the previous comments, i don't think this needs an M rating- it's a little slashy, but it's not graphic.

i think what made me make the fangirl noise (you know the one, sounds a bit like "awghw" and makes your head tilt to one side for no reason) was crowley feeling bad for causing aziraphale to suffer. and the "it'll get better" was just perfect. not to mushy, but you can just see them breaking with their predetermined roles for a moment, quietly, under the radar, for each others' sake.

really lovelly.

Sweet ;) I think it's little ooc, but well written ;) go on this way.

And I think rating M is not necessary. It was only kiss, wasn't it?

I like it a lot, but I don't think it has to be rated M...

This is awesome, too.

Yeah, I'm kinda going through your fics, at the moment... Although I think you'll receive my reviews in the reverse order, so this may become apparent within the next few PM's you get, lol.

I just really like the way you write. It's simple and describes things perfectly without being over-descritpive. You seem to write within a believable context and nail the characters on the head.