i dont write horrible reviews (until now) but i have to say i HATE this story and it is not just a romance u should have given more warning if this was how it was to end its crap and exstremely upsetting. so i quickly skipped to the end of the sequel to see if it was any better and i dont like discouraging people but im senciry disappionted and i dont mean to be a bitch but please dont write another kaihil fic cos uve totally destroyed it for me.

Great...why'd you stop writing...I loved all your stories...particularly this one..I hope you do make a sequel to this one as well,I really imagine them reuniting once again...I feel stupid commenting 3,4 years after you finished this story,but just cant help expressing my desire..I would love to read your work again...I do hope you make another sequel...all the best and you are a great writer..

that was such a great story! I loved it, the ending was kinda sad though

hey...aw... now im really sad about kai being away from hilary. so is there going to be a sequal to it well i hope so. and i loved it

aww, the story ended...

The beginning of the last chapter was ok. Hilary seemed to be annoying and selfish again... but I liked her when she started understanding Kai's reasons.

I like the very end of the chapter. Not the 'happy ending' or the soap opera ending. It's really motivating. I do hope that they don't have to start from the very beginning again. After all they went through, it seemed a bit too much work :p

Anyways, I usually don't prefer sequels to endings like this since they trigger people to think more. But, if you decide to make one, I'd read it for sure:).

Till then

ciao ciao

I CANNOT THINK THAT HISTORY HAS ALREADY FINISHED

I LOVED IT

PLEASE CONTINUOUS WRITING. TO MY I LIKE TO READ YOUR HISTORIES

wow, I'm about to cry. One reason: the ending was really good, and sad bc he was leaving! and two: it's over! i've been reading this since BEFORE i got an account! CRAZYNESS! lol. i dont want it to be over! (. oh well, time to move on, and "Begin Again" with a new story from you as soon as you come back. lol. lovedd it. soo much.

~Moonlight Serenity

aka Jess

I Liked it! Keep up the good work!

wow wow wow

i loved this chapter

great chapter

update soon, please

That was a really great chapter, but I'm slightly confused... if Tyson and Tala won their matches then wouldn't they have to have faced off? Well anyway that was a minor problem.

I thought it was really good that Tyson won it in the end. It fit even though I'm sure a lot of people would have wanted the winner to be Kai.

I hope the story isn't ending too soon. I'd like to find out what happens with Kai, and the others of course.

Aanyway, it was a wonderful chapter. Well done!

hay! i've just read all of the 'Beginning's' series - or whatever you call it. lol. and i absolutely love them all! this one is especially good! wow, Kai lost...poor Kai :(

He's going back to Russia? How's everyone going to handle that one? Can't wait till you next update!

DancerInTheDark101

OMFG! HE'S GOING TO RUSSIA! NO, DAMMIT! lol. omg, this chapter was totally amazing! loved it to pieces! lol. Go Garnet! lol. And Kai's reaction to the curtain being pulled away was priceless. lol. ) Your writing rocks! please update soon!

~Moonlight Serenity

aka Jess

hayy, sorry I haven't reviewed your stories in AGES! I have been reading I was just well... I'm not going to make any excuses for myself... I was too lazy to review. I'm really sorry.

I hope ya update soon! :D

x

This story is really a pleasure to read. I'm always hoping for more at the end of the chapter, though I guess that's what keeps everyone interested. I loved the scene between Kai and Garnet in this chapter.

Please update soon.

very good!

please upgrade!