This story is very well written and it's a shame you didn't finish it.

OMG, I loved your writing so so so so much!3 You're an amazing writer :)

Ich habe die Story for ein paar Jahren schon gefunden, als ich gerade Eragon wieder las. Und jetzt gerade wieder entdeckt. Immer noch sehr schön zu lesen. Aber man kann wohl nicht damit rechnen, dass es nochmal weitergeht?

This is a very good, well-written story! I was seriously surprised and sad to reach the last chapter! Are you planning on continuing it still?

Your story is stunning, really! Are you thinking of her being poisoned or she will continue refusing to eat, I wonder?

need to have arya be raped

Very enjoyable story. You're going to hate me but I really want the next chap. now! You are very gifted in writing so keep it up! I would LOVE if:

Arya is tied up and brought to Durzas chambers and then he forces her to do...things (make sure she DOES NOT do it out of free will though. Arya is a strong elf!) details are key!

Thanks a bunch!

Hello!

Though Arya is my favorite character, I am enjoying this story. I like torture, but only reading it. I am not that messed up. Actually I'm not that messed up at all, but whatever. So good job! And if you are still looking for a beta, I can be yours if you want. And, just saying, this story says it is Aryaxdurza. (hint hint)

-Saskia

hmmm...personally, i like reading about creative ways instead of the traditional methods...food for thought!

btw, from the last chapter-isn't Arya's hair black?

i find regular whipping torture scenes to be quite boring to read,

actually.

good story

i love it. you portrayed them very realistically. keep it up!

i have seen this story on Shur-gual fanfiction, and i was waiting for an up date there, but, please, continue!

i have read this story over and over, and have waited to long for you to stop now!

please, keep going!

Is that the end? Please don't tell me that's the end, it was so great.