Alright... I'm going to sound like a flamer here, but fuck it.

Ok, this is Naruto-wank taken to the upmost extreme. Naruto is unbeatable, ALWAYS put into the right, and his nation never ever loses. And, the Evil Races wonder why the 'good' races wanted them dead? Well, they commit Genocide, rape, slaughter at will. And their idea of a peace summit is putting their leaders heads on pikes. Oh yeah, they are really misunderstood, they just are violent by nature and will kill us all for fun! Herp Derp. And, then, we have the nation wank. Seriously, I haven't seen such Nation-wank since the Draka series. Naruto manages to master the rail road in a month and his technology advances too fast to be entertaining. Their economy never collapses. And there is never a single slave revolt; and just like the Draka series; everybody seems to have no problem keeping slaves and treating them brutally. Also, his harem is insulting; and you reference them being 'broken.' Which is offensive to women, even more when Hinata runs away to join his harem over a childhood crush when she hasn't even seen him for six bloody years.

Naruto himself is a dislikable character; oh yeah, go on and on about how your childhood was bad while you keep Elves as sex slaves and Breeding stock. Then, he also wages a long and expensive war against Konoha just to 'prove a point.' Now, thats pointless, and very anti-climatic.

Then there are your rants against America, guess what buddy? My nation earned it's place in history. And, while politically correct, liberal 'intellectual' twits, like you, blame America for the worlds problems; we are actually in the field trying to make the world a better place even while we may not be perfect, we are better then a lot of other cultures.

Great job

damnit. i hoped to read more chapter.

Great Chapter And Fanfic! I Hope To See More Of This! Also I Hope Wendy And Her Friends Join Naruto's Harem As Well.

GOOD LUCK!

nice fic so far even with the grammatical errors/issues

I can agree with you on the end there, Boll is one of the idiots who thinks they can just make the movie based on a game in THEIR vision and not how it was created.

Assholes.

This is incredibly boring.

Yeah, think I'm done.
I love the idea of watching a civilization grow. It's why I stuck around despite the typo's and everything else.

But even though I know a person only will only write what they find interesting, and that if I write something, it's not going to be to everyone's taste...where was I going with this?

Oh yeah, we write what we like, and the hatred in this is more than I can stand.
Killing babies? Pass.

Please update this fic soon please!

Ch The Mordor power is stronger than the Ninjas.
The supposed to be good racers are losing their magic.
And are desperate. What happens next ?

Ch we . The Scrolls and knolige from that Village ?

Go fucking die this isn't dark naruto because if it was he would have killed her for telling other people everything it's just grey naruto who's weak as shit I've wasted my time reading this piece of shit

I just came across this, it's so good! It's a shame it seems to have stopped.

will this story still be updated?

Only danzo would do that