aw. now i wanna cry. id say *sniffles* here but it wouldn't count as much because i have a cold...

I think this is very good, it is far better than what I wrote at 13 and english is my first language so this is a very impressive fanfic indeed.

I absolutley adore this. I love this couple and I always delight in finding something about them.

Also, your English is better than the English of most native speakers.

First, the fact that English is not your native language, you did a wonderful job writing it. I have seen fics from people whose native tongue IS English and they didn't do nearly as good of a job.

Second, I have to applaud you for the mature way you handled the subject matter, considering you were only twelve, or close to twelve, when you wrote this.

Third, I thought it was very sweet and well-written.

I keep meaning to review this fic, but I never think of it, despite the fact that I've very probably read it thirty times.

Let me begin by saying that I love the parallelism. It's a simple enough literary device, yet rarely do I see it used so skillfully; in fact, it's rare that I find such a short fic with so much to offer! There are so many things I love about how you've written this.

I admit that my love for angst is surpassed only by my love for Tumblebrutus, and both of them together... I can't help but love you. Everything about this fic is quite understated and I feel it adds a lot. There's a lot of "white space," as it were, to play around with, as we mainly see the characters through one another's eyes. That may or may not make sense - I'm having difficulties explaining what I mean.

On a more coherent note, it's very pretty, and call me strange, but the fact that you chose a dandelion as a point of comparison for Skimbleshanks strikes me as rather clever. Dandelions are just weeds, but like Skimbleshanks, they do have a certain subtle beauty and appeal to them. That sounds silly, but I feel you said it best. :)

I love this fic so much. I prostrate myself before you, oh goddess among fic-writers!

If anyone's obsessed, I am. I downloaded about a million Misto pics from the Jacob Brent Fanpage, and I would prob'ly stalk him if I knew where he lived. As it is, if I ever do see him, my mind will probably stop working until he goes away. The fandom needs more Skimble stuff. You should write some Skimble/Misto slash. Misstto... *drools* Once, I actually did drool while looking at Misto pics...

I adored this story! It is one of the best out there!

wow, this was great! i can't believe it- english isn't your first language? you write like a pro! :) i LOVED this story- i've never read this pairing before, but now i think i like it. that was just the right mix of cute and sad. well done!

I can't imagine what it'd be like to leave your home for somewhere so far away... But you've probably heard that before, haven't you?

You're an amazing writer, and how old you are shouldn't change how people look at you. It shouldn't, but it probably will. Either way... Well, at least you tell how old you are. I still haven't revealed that, but I'm hoping to sometime soon. When I've got enough stories up to prove I shouldn't be underestimated.

Good luck with everything, though. Now onto the actual story.

It's cute and yes, a bit depressing... But deep. Deeper than it originally appears. (Random idea... Each story has a colour. The colours for this one are grey/blue, neon yellow, an unspecified shade of green, and navy blue.) There's a problem and a rather half finished solution. (And that's a good thing.)

Beautiful, really.

That was very good. A bit weird at first, but good.

wow, you're Korean? I would never have guessed. your English is great! I've been reading some of your newer stuff over the past couple of days, and I have to say I have not found a single spelling or grammar mistake. great job!

as for this little ficlet, it's lovely. a little depressing that they didn't show each other the things they wanted to, but it was sweet in the end. _

tell me, are there a lot of Japanese/Asian fansites for Cats? I would love to see them.

You are officaly my faveorite writer. .

Cute!

Once more, I tip my hat to you! Having to learn a completely different language and actually using it makes me shudder...on the bright side, your grammer and spelling is brilliant because you put so much effort into it! I also love the almost repetative (in a good way) nature of this fiction, from the first part as compared to the second. Favorited...you're writing is just much too lovely not too!