Always liked this one. Wasn't sure it was still up when I searched for it, but immensely happy when it was the first thing that popped up.

Thank you for leaving this up. It may be old, but it's still good and while Link breaks his mute streak his dialogue doesn't seem out of character for him. Great work, looking forward to reading again.

Such a lovely mini story! Perfectly in character and just the right amount of fluff. Lovely

LOL. Poor Ilia. Midna scared her witless. lol. Very funny, very cute. (Though the last line had me bursting into a song from my fourth grade play.) I enjoyed this a lot. :D

I mostly enjoyed "Not So Obedient" for it's showcasing of your ability to write: "a small bubble of turmoil marring her sea of serenity." If I come across as overly praising, I hope that justifies me...the literary tools at work in that phrase. The short story sort of lacked a really continuity, but since it isn't truly meant to have a wholesome goal and is mostly just a string of events, I find it easy to dismiss. However, I thought it odd that Midna fails to directly recall the conversation in the first chapter of Link specifically telling her not to take him to Kakariko village, and later regards it as a brilliant new plan... You managed, however, to correctly pace and present moments that I depress myself as a writer failing to do. For example your explanation of Midna channeling through her Zelda's power. Since I knew it was coming and I had already developed a not solidly justified admiration for your works, I was being overly critical of this part, and I was not let down. Only the initial "opening the flood gates" phrasing threw me, because it seemed not so uniquely worded as I was getting used to, however, it provided the first step to a much more impressive string of emotions and actions, so, again, forgiven.

This all said (and I hopefully have provided a review that actually has more sides to it than expressing my fondness of your writing style) I expect even greater from you. You shine in these short stories, and it truly brings a wonderful light to these characters in moments that are genuinely and fairly constructed, but it just shows so much promise for a fully dimensional and structured long story. I may be missing this exactly since I am not reading your Harry Potter fan fiction, but regrettably I am rather enthralled with the Midna and Link characters at the moment, and with school, I don't allow myself the interest in much more for fear of time restrictions. Luckily for me, your works have made it impossible for me to read any other fan fictions regarding this story, so I am returned to me my free time, though I will absolutely keep track of any development you have in any Zelda works, because they truly are a privilege to read.

-Casey

I guess in a way this is a Midna/Link I like and Ilia does fit in the losers weepers category , lol!

I like and I fav!

I like this story, the summary and the first three chapters were really dramatic and well written. They even had some funny parts with Midna that were really nice.

The clasification of Tragedy doesn't quite fit because no one died. The Drama fit for mostly the first three chapters and Midna's healing part. After chapter 4 the story just turned into another Ilia bashing with less drama towards the end and too much jelousy from Midna's part towards someone that didn't even knew her. I'm a Link/Midna fan, but really don't have anything against Ilia. I put the story in my favorites because I like the concept, but the story could have turned out better in my opinion.

Anyway, just wanted to let my review known. If anything offended you, it was really not my intention. I'm sorry.

That was cute!

Is there going to be a sequel? ;)

You have a knack for Link/Midna.. so continue! :D

hah, nice story! Yeah, a bit of mushiness. I don't mind though...

A fittingly bittersweet ending (*smirks* at least they both kicked the ReDead's arse). I really like the way you write Midna/Link banter and interactions. The Zelda-voice was a nice touch for Midna thinking about her feelings.

By far my favourite line was:

'She was not jealous; perhaps a tad possessive, but Link was her wolf, dammit: her ranch boy, her Hero. She had found him first, and finder’s keepers, loser’s weepers, and Ilia fit that category nicely.'

I hope you write another Link/Midna fic soon, you definitely have a knack for it.

verily this rocketh, please put in a Midna/Ilia fight.

Nice:]

You got a new reader! ;)

Midna-the-Twilight-Princess-damn-you tantrums?

xD

*favs*

The licking part (as well as the bit about the pillow) were brilliantly done, I could just see Midna's expression of disgust *grins*

Only thing that I didn't get was how Link turned into a wolf if Midna was already knocked out...or did I just miss how that happened?

Anyway, I'll be sad to see this end, as I'm really enjoying it. Looking forward to the next chapter.

I don't think you've lost your Midna touch at all. And I will look foward to more from you (and more and more and just a tad more).

Nice update. If you keep this up I'll have to add you to my favorite authors.