'Merlin's Mount'- great. really liked this, roger and cho are rarely handled likeably and you pulled off a completely believable dynamic, great conversation, and fabulous last line. nice play on the not-getting-thrown-off-the-team idea - really good, believable piece. nice job! :D

Wow, another excellent piece! I absolutely ADORE your Cho. You really gave her more depth and took her beyond the stage of 'whiny human hosepipe' that most fic authors get stuck at. The exchange between Roger and Cho was perfect- come to think of it, I love how you wrote Roger, too. I think in the books he comes across as really self-absorbed, but he must have some intelligence up there to have been sorted into Ravenclaw. I like that Cho undergoes a sort of catharsis in this. There was a great resolution to her feelings of unhappiness, and I'm glad that she was able to reconcile with Davies in the end.

I like your interpretation of the relationship between Cho and Roger. I would imagine that it would be at least some-what...er..awkward between them, especially after everything that happened with Harry. Nicely done.

I liked the exchange between Roger and Cho. It was cute.

Aww. I think that was really well done - also, there were hardly any mistakes. Such a good thing xx

OH i like! well, kind of lol, kinda mean on harry dont you think? oh well. gud story anyway.