This story is soon cute... defrosted chicken.. ha ha very funny

Ok so I first read some of the reviews before this story and they all mentioned defrosted chicken... At first I was like what the heck? But now I'm going to continue that tradition and mention defrosted chicken too! I loved the originality of this story! And I especially thought it was kinda funny in a sad way that Kaito dumped Rika for a defrosted chicken... Hahahahhah!

Its great

Aww... this is story is so cute! Lol, seriously, the last part with defrosted chickens was so funny! Haha!

The ending was SOOO good!

honestly, your story seems interesting based on ur summary.
but then your defrosted chicken totally put me off. im not sure was it you, but i read a story where they had even defrosted chicken theme park.
it's way over the mark.
if you're trying to be funny, it's not.
if you want to add a signature object, then you did it in a way where your object becomes an instant reason to drop this story
defrosted chicken is weird enough in its own rights. you only have to mention it once or twice to have readers remember it.
really, all i rmb now after reading the first chapter was 'ew. defrosted chicken'
because that image itself is too strong and overwhelming, plus your stressing in it totally kills the story.

This all happened because of a DEFROSTED CHICKEN.
:O
Love the story so much words cannot describe it. Thank you so much for writing this.

love the the way... do u have something uh... crazy, about defrosted chicken? Don't get mad!

defrosted chiken jajajaja great NXM RXH

DEfrosted Chicken. XDD BWAHAHAHA

WHAAAAAAAAAAAA! ! I NEVER EVER FELT LIKE THIS WHEN READING A FANFICTION STORY I NEVER WANTED TO CRY SOOOOOOO BAD! IM GOING TO MAKE MYSELF CRY CUZ I NEEEEEEEDDDD TO CRY RIGHT NOW SOOOO BAD AHHHHHH! ] i love this stoy i need to cry now
bye

-KL

aww! way to sweet he just needed her! awww!

OMG! That is so freaky! Yesterday I had a Vocabulary quiz that I crammed for yesterday and the word lethargic was on it! THAT IS SO COOL! :) . _ •_• •.•

i am disappointed to myself. WHY HAVEN'T I DISCOVERED THIS STORY EARLIER? anyways, LOVE IT ~ i thought Natsume's gonna die x_x GOOD THING HE DIDN'T. frankly, I WANT MORE :D one of the best vampire-themed fic.

and yeah. who could have thought that the Defrosted Chicken thingy can be contagious? seriously? i've posted last night on my FB wall (it's late and i stooped at chap6) saying "Good Night Defrosted Chickens" whut the?

I'M ROOTING FOR YOU ~ MORE STORIES TO COME :D

kisses xxx

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