I am enjoying this story so far. I love that Hayley plays a big part in it (she was completely underused in Dino Thunder.) I am curious as to who these new people are and what is going to happen. You write them in a believable way. You have excellent writing skills.

can you please update soon? what happened to kim? is she at the flower shop? please update soon!

thanks

Let me just say, the I'm disappointed. I'm disappointed that this story was simply stopped where it's at without having a chance to finish. I'm intrigued by the dynamics you worked into this story, and have found myself more or less pulled into it along the way. I also have more respect for people who write in the teenaged Dino Thunder Rangers as having a closer bond, rather than acting hostile to each other, as tends to happen. For instance, when Kira found Conner sketching, or even Conner and Trent's bonding over soccer.

Now I'm not making any demands... I know I'm in no position to force anyone to update anything, but I would highly appreciate getting the chance to read more of this. It seemed to be going in a direction that I'm sure I would highly agree with, plus it's humorous for all the right reasons. The kids stumbling upon the van and finding the car seat and their speculation as to what it really was? Priceless. I want to read more like that, and only you could make that happen.

Definitely one of the best fics I've (ever) read. Initially I thought Lisa was Kim, on description alone but hey, the mystery deepens. :)

I like this you definitely have continue writing this

ooh fun story so far, interesting twist with the possible death of kim, this gonna be updated again anytime soon?

Wow. Awesome chapter. Very powerful. Is Kim dead? I doubt it... and that woman at the flower shop... Oo-oh! Really looking to see where you take this! Update soon please!

GASP !

You... you... you're a genius ! I can't believe that ! I don't imagine one second that bomb ! WOW !

WOW !

And Tommy's reaction is so perfect, so Tommy.

Damn Cliffhanger !

I wait the next update ! I'll look at my mail as falcon eyes !

Good job !

1. The Falcon and Cane are spiritually linked. If she died Tommy would know.

2. Kim's mom's name on the series is Caroline Dumas, she married Frenchman Piere Dumas.

3. Tommy's reaction is perfect.

GOOD JOB!

I LOVE it so far...but Kim can not be dead...it is just not possible!

Whoa... they think Kim's dead?

But she's not... wow, just, yeah wow.

My thoughts are going a mile a minute on this story, very excellent. I'm eager for more.

Oh wow! That was a MAJOR bomb dropped on Tommy. But Jason should know that Tommy would be able to tell if that was Kim. A lover would know. I can't WAIT to find out what happened to Kim.

This is goin so good! Damn Cliffhanger! But I seriously can't wait until i see what the story is about Kim!

I can't wait to see what will happen when they tell Tommy about

Kim!

Oh STUPID CLIFFHANGER! I was all hyped up, about to press next when there WASN'T a next.

Lol. Great story!