whatever happened to 'Next chapter very soon'? :'(
I know you most likely won't, but pleeeeeeaaaaaase update!

Balm on my sparrabeth shipper's heart Love it

I think this is one of my fav fics of jack and lizzy on the island, so well written! Bravo!

I..uh.i know u wrote this a long time ago but please finish it...it's amazing
First fanfic I've ever commented on, and I've read a lot

Who knew het could be so hot? *fans self*

It'd be so awesome if you continued this, pretty please, with a cherry on top? xD

Oh my goodness! How angsty! I cannot BELIEVE you did that. GAHH! Since when did Jack get morals? Are you kidding me? *screams*

Ok, *breathes deeply* ahem, anyways...this was really good! I mean, it was angsty, and I felt so bad for Jack...and for Elizabeth too.

I just really don't know what to say except for that enjoyed it. [: Good job.

Sincerely,

HoistTheColours

xD That was soo cute. Jack teaching someone to kiss? It's adorable. This really should have been how it went. Top marks for you and this fanfic, you did a great job. :3

Ice

Ah, wicked Jacksmermaid, you done well with the talkin', dearie. Laid it out right and proper as Jack would. That boy, he can set the hook so smoothly the little girls ne'er know that they be hooked. Oh yes, the gauntlet, clever man that Sparrow, later Mark Twain wrote on him, but called him Tom Sawyer, workin the lass until she begs for her own ravishment. Elisabeth, beautiful and reckless, doesn't even know the hurricane she steeped in his breeches. She's a sensual one, big wide eyes and sweet sweet mouth. It's fun and funny to see Jack caught on his own hook as well, didn't realize when he began he was going to put a burden on himself. Your line was fine, subtle and twisy just nice. Your words sound just like the beloveds. So true, one thing leads to another...fair winds, Miz Jacksmermaid-more please and soon!

What an oh-so-passionate story..."I'm going to go take a walk, and I want you to sleep. Kissing lesson over, you earned top marks, good night." Haha that's funny. :)

Great chapter! Update soon!

o) is watching you...crazibookwormi

Oi! Very good. Very passionate! wonderful Sparrabeth! Please please please update soon! I loved it! I know it's not a one shot...

Update soon, luv!

wah! where's the next chappie! me lovey!

I loved the last line. And the whole story. More kissing lessons :D:D

It's been more than a day. Please update. Please! Love the story

Oh My Gosh, i want more kissing lessons,

PLEASE update soon!

omg you have got to finish this... please... i will make you a coconut and rum cake... ;)