Please update, I'm really eager to see what happens next.

great , please update soon. i really like it

luke so riled up and vader so messed up

nana lee

Whoa... Luke got half of it wrong...

I really like this, I look forward to more

great start!

Great work. I wouldn't even try to write in German any more, even though I grew up speaking it in the house and took courses in college.

Wonderful insight into the characters. Luke trusting Ben so much that he is getting the figures mied up - just who is his father? Good to see the fight from a different perspective also.

And, the evil emperor pulling the strings behind everything. Good work.

Thank you so much for honorable mention it is really kind of you and besides this is an awesome story!

m.m.m.m Great chapter. I am so happy that you updated. update!

Very good start, I can't wait to read more.

Get start but with the cliff hanger... when the next chapter going to be up?

Anyway, update!

Not a bad start. Some grammatical errors. What'll happen next?

Congratulations, amiguita! Ja ja. Soy yo, Lady Flame bajo mi otro pen name. Ah, qué pena no haberlo leído el día que lo publicaste, hubiese sido un buen regalo de cumpleaños. Sí, es el 2 de enero.;)

Me alegra mucho ver esta historia en inglés pues es una muy excelente. Así tanto los que hablamos español como los anglosajones tendremos la oportunidad de apreciarla. Espero pronto leer la segunda parte.

Te doy 'two thumbs up'. Qué la Fuerza te acompañe siempre.

I enjoyed a lot reading how Darth Sidious had planned everything and how deep in anger Vader became...it is so intense the visions and turmoil he is going through...

:)

This is great! Please continue.

QN :)

Interesting start. Intriguing cliffhanger.