Aww adorable! I loved that this was told from the perspective of Fred rather than Katie or Oliver - it was very fresh. And, of course, Fred kept me laughing...

Indeed, there seemed to be various pools and circles of friends making wild bets on how long it would take for either one of to snap. Fred himself had overheard Snape and Flitwick chipping in twenty galleons each on the outcome.

Brilliant!

This was really funny. Cliche, yes, but funny.

Haha, I liked this! :D

NIce nice nice nice NICE! Hahahahahaha, omigosh, can't breath. That was frickin great. He didn't even lock the door. Marvelous story by the way!

You're not the only one without Cupboard kissing FFS, I haven't any my self (yet).

But, I'll fix it!

Cupboard soloution must be the best soloution... I think i could work with Lily and James too, right? But... there already is some 'cupboard LE/JP'

anyhow, I like cupboard-kisses!

haha this was different. but i like it )

that was very clever. I wish it could have been from Katie and Oliver's points of veiw, but it was still good all the same

Really well written. Better than the usual: "OMGSTFU! I hate you!: Katie says. "You're hot, let's make out in the broom closet." Oliver says in a Scottish brogue. The end. I especially like "Love, that's what it does t you, creates illusions and false hopes." I loved it!

And I thought the broom cupboard was supposed to be a place where people couldn't peek? ;]

Hahaha. Brilliant! And to think there are two red-headed geniuses in the wizarding world! ;D

mwahaha! Fred is brilliant! lol very good story!

Love it! That was pure cuteness!

Great one shot! It was pretty funny, especially the part about Fred just closing the door.

I love this! It is so funny, and it makes me smile happily! :-) Yay! :-)

haha! that was hilarious!

I loved it. great job!