Brava Brava. In just seven chapters you have made me feel as if I have read a whole 228 page novel. Your writing is so fleshed as are your characters and plot. I just fell into everything and never wanted to let go. Great great great as always.

I like that Jess wrote letters he never sent, just as Rory wrote/started letters from Washington that she was unable to send. It drives home, how the two are so different yet so much a like. I really enjoy the closing sentences you have in each chapter.

Aaaaaaattttt Laaaaaaaaaassst lol. I dig how soft and tender but still bold and forthcoming they are with one another.

To Rory and Jess.
As Nike says
Just Do it!

I'm grinning from ear to ear. I love that Jess went right in for the kiss. No pretense or waiting a couple dates, more phone calls and dancing around what they both want. He went in and she responded and I adore you writing :D

This is so them. They got out what they really felt and meant to say from these phone calls, but went about it in all the wrong ways but hey the result is nice...I am so loving this. Wish you would come back to us and be writing (or updating) your fics.

damn, that came nicely close to having phone sex. next time, just let them go for it. let their imagination, voices, hands, go where it may. i understand the fear and hesitation on Jess' part and I'm enjoying this more bold, open, and honest Rory.

Wow this is one of the best stories I've written. The developement of the plot is amazing and the dialogues are simply breathtaking.

i read the 1st story and this and it was amazing! I loved the ending! made me tear up just a little. great job.

Aw. You posted this almost 10 years ago. Whatever, reviewing it anyway. This was wonderful. I adored how it began with a phone call. How Jess is ready to let things sit before he's thrown right back into feelings he'd been trying to ignore for probably years. How Rory is so sure of herself, and ready to try this again. The way they fought before deciding to try again. And oh the sex. So intimate. Rory crying for the first time, just so happy to finally be doing that with him. It was really just so wonderful.

I read chapters 1-7 and I'm dying for more... You wrote this so long ago, I can't believe I am just now reading it for the first time! Ugh, I wish you had written more!

Good god would you stop making Rory look so pathetic and needy? This speech was horrible! Do you even know how relationships work you moron? It's two People not just one for fucks sake. So stop being such a Jess loving bitch and stop patronizing him. He needs to Open the fuck up too if he wants to be with her. Your behaviour towards Rory is appalling and utterly disgusting!

I think this is the third time I've read this story - love it every time it's perfect

Love, love this story.
Probably one of my favorite of yours. You are very talented and I wonder if you are writing something else. You haven't written GG in a while *sob*!

GOD! Love it.
Love your writting style, love the story, love how they are, how they "fight", how they love each other, how they simple are a match. Love it!

Such an amazing surprise finding this fanfic as a recomendation on tumblr. Happy that I took the chance to read it.

BTW. Did I say I love this? :)