Oh man, sheer perfection. Amazing!

Freakin' sweet. Sexy as all hell. Major kudos.

Oh God...this was so good.

The start was a bit hard in my eyes, but so the last love making was much nicer.

I understand that Alex is really pissed off, because of Bobby. The end of this episode was so hard. And Bobby comes only to hear what Roass says, very mean.

I like that you make a litte backflash to Blind Spot and that Bobby stays with Alex for a few nights.

Both smoke...bä!

The fight was very extreme...loud screams and violences and flying candleholders.

Bobby treads Alex like a suspect...I would be pissed off too.

And then the hard fucking starts. Each want to control the other one. Hurt the other one. ...Fucking away the pains...

Alex controls even her orgasm and then Bobby wants to test this theory and turns her on her belly. But I like that it is the best fuck from each other in their live. Bobby touches Alex at places no man ever reaches.

It is a bit mean, that Alex is totally nacked and Bobby wears everything.

Both show their dominance and then they say the right thing ...I love you... so sweet, they are so happy, both cry and kiss the tears away.

Finally the make love with each other, slowly, calm, tenderly.

Thanks for this one, I really enjoy the reading.

*Throws a box of cookies* LOL. Love it! I was surprised at first by the anger Alex and Bobby had, but then I loved it. I loved the anger they both shared and so much more. I'd love to read more of these stories you write. )

~Snyder~

just speechless...so good.

Some mature content? It took over the story! lol!

It's almost shameful getting into their private alternate lives! (;

Well written and well choreographed for a birds and bees scene. And please, more! :)

YAY! LOL SO good. Very hot and very amazing. Fabulous work. :) I love it. And the end was perfect. SO sweet. :D

OMG, that story is so f-ing hot!

*pours buckets of freezing water on herself*

Im having a heartattak, continue.

Yea that was pretty much the best smut I've ever read in my life.

by all means continue.

Wow! Glad I found this...on someone else's favorits list. Extremely hot 'n sexy..descriptive...a wonderful "coupling" of our fav couple.

...adding to my fav list too. Obviously I'd love to read more!

wow...hot hot hot!

*hands you a whole life's worth supply of cookies*

Yes, I want you to continue this :D this was so hot i think...i ruined my keyboard with all the drool :) and desire AKA salt on our skin is a good movie to drool over :)

Sassy

I guess having a horrible disagreement and feeling "left out"..that the makeup part is really really good...look forward to reading more...thanks

Loved it! Great way to set off a new year! Keep cranking these out.. thanks!