| Reviews for A Wish to an End |
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D72 chapter 1 . 3/11/2017 See you in 50 years? So boruto is gonna chop her head off? |
Guest chapter 12 . 12/25/2016 updateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdate |
Digital Dragon Productions chapter 12 . 7/7/2011 Great Job! I like it that it's a very unique story. |
neko-kougal chapter 12 . 5/7/2009 i know this is not a real chapter but its the only one my phone allowed me to review. will naru-chan appear again? this is a wonderful story. waiting patiently for future chapters. i know how it goes sometimes |
Golden Arms chapter 10 . 1/21/2009 I'm so weak..! Been reading this since almost four this morning. It's 9:45, and I can't read two more chapters in one sitting... NO! Seriously, though, it's excellent story. I'm actually surprised it hasn't drawn more least a few hundred of them. A few things are kind of unusual, in the portrayal of the village, which kind of makes me wish it weasn't so big a fanfic convention (Naruto's place run down? Have you seen where Kurenai lives? Ohmigosh!) The shrewd-plotting Hokage's something new. Not certain how to really take that, since he seems like he's just stuck between a rock and a hard place, but just sounds like he doesn't really give a damn about it. I suppose it's my own view that the Hokage is THE authority of the village, and is a lot sharper than to let people run amok like they do in fanon. At any rate. I'll resume my fortitude after a good nap nd finish two measely chapters. Hope you write more to this series. |
Foxcomm chapter 3 . 11/8/2008 actually, when you said boss theme, the first thing i heard in my mind was the boss theme from FF7. Although at final boss theme, i thought jenova theme. I am sure you will explain this very soon but why does she hate ninjas? Semper Fi, Foxcomm |
ADD Kyuubi Naruto chapter 12 . 5/30/2008 Lol I love the story, if Ah! My Goddess weren't licensed I would totally watch it though |
aledeth chapter 12 . 5/30/2008 This is... wow. Very ambitious work here, and you've done a wonderful job of it so far. Easily the best Naruto/OMG cross that's still alive, and the amount of work you put into each chapter definitely shows. I love it. |
The Great Rick chapter 12 . 5/21/2008 Great chapter, but since it was the Hanabi special, I thought it would be more focused on her. That made me a little sad but the again, the chapter was good. |
Quathis chapter 12 . 5/20/2008 A good showing of the Hyuuga sisters and their adventures with Naruto. The stones at the end were a nice touch, including the Omake. Very funny. Glad I could be of help. The suspensful build-up really made the scene where he revealed the balloon. Really enjoyed that. |
Sakura Lisel chapter 1 . 5/20/2008 Wait I have a few questions about this story. Naruto wished that Skuld stayed with him FOREVER and EVER. Are there going to be side effects on both of them because of that wish, especially after fifty years? Maybe Naruto becomes immortal or something because of the way he phrased the wish? And why fifty years? One or both of them are going to die in their sixties? And if the wish changed reality so that everyone in Konoha remembers Skuld as ALWAYS being there for the last ten years of Naruto's life, then what's her new role in Naruto's supposed to be especially if their supposed to be living together in an apartment? Anyways, I like it so far. |
Megaolix chapter 12 . 5/20/2008 Nice chapter as always. But there's isn't anything really standing out. But it's still a nice chapter. And lol at the last Omake. Hina-sama... Naruto is so clueless. I'll be waiting for next chapter. |
kazekagesama23 chapter 12 . 5/19/2008 I was growing increasingly depressed as I browsed through the daily crap that gets put up in the Naruto section. Then, like a bastion of hope, your fanfic caught my eye. Good summary, interesting sounding plot, I decided to check it out. I almost cried tears of joy at finding one of those rare well written Naruto fanfics. And it's a crossover. Even better. Now, the above may make me sound like a complete girly-man, but it's really frustrating to have to comb through TWENTY FREAKIN' PAGES of crap Naruto stories to find about five or six worth reading. Anyway, love the story. You are definitely going on my favorite author list. On a side note, I also get a kick out of reading your reviews on some of the more...questionable Ranma fanfiction. Just an observation. |
xBud chapter 10 . 4/15/2008 nice story, good mix of characters and their personalities. liked how naruto picks up on the inventing. the story has evolved very much in terms of style from the first chapter to now keep up the great work just a small suggestion, the time in the story sometimes fells like its frozen, and then the next thing you know, its naruto's second bday i m not saying that anythings wrong with it, in fact i liked it a lot, and loved the amount of time and depth you've given everything. guess i m rambling now, anyway, keep it up. |