Interesting take on his story, I cant wait to see what you make of it. :)

DANGER, DANGER WILL ROBINSON!

I DETECT HIGH AMOUNTS OF FAIL IN THIS SECTOR!

I liked it, too bad you gave it up.

WOW! I loved this, a really original take on things, I love how Malchior isnt just a villain in this, he truly is a higher entity and now you're sharing what they could never have thought of in the TV Show.

Seriously. You're amazing!

I cannot wait for more, and I apologise for late review.

X

Fascinating. Your unlimited details make everything very easy to imagine! That last sentense is pretty chilling. Excellent cliff hanger.

Thanks for the rapid updating, I can't wait for the next chapter.

Oh, in case you're curious, you request for One Hundred? (The extremely amusing story about Beastboy doing laundry) I gladly used it and gave you all credit. Thanks again for it, it makes me smile.

~Rose

This is absolutely the best take on Malchior that anyone has ever done. I don't care that I haven't read every bit of Malchior fiction in existence.

Anyone reading this think they have a better take on him? You're wrong. Not only are you wrong, but you suck. Suck, suck, suck. Now bow to the power of H and beg his forgiveness.

Yeah, that was a bit of a tangent, but you deserve it man. I eagerly await more.

Shiny! I love the way you've incorperated all sorts of differant mythos, the glaring ones are Norse (Jotun/Muspell) and (correct me if I'm wrong) Assyrian/Babolynian (Kingu, Marduk) along with Egyptian (Ma and Mu?) not to mention reminding me a bit of the Silmarillian.

Back to the subject of Malchior, this has got to be the most singularly awesome backstory I've ever seen for him.

aw...I've always liked Malchior

Ha. That last line, I can totally hear him saying it. All british and witty. -;

Shall I start from the top then? Alrighty. Nice way to grab reader's attention. Amazing details, by the way. No offence, but your typical writing style (from what I've read) didn't give away how much talent you really have at writing. Which isn't really a bad thing. Your humor fics probably wouldn't be the same with such detail.

Jinx, that minx. (Couldn't help it!) I like where this is going! The tv series really gave us freedom with Malchior, I'm interested to see what you come up with.

~Rose

I don't know what prelude is...but I loved this chapter! The Robin part was very mysterious, I don't know who Zauriel is...but I'll still enjoy this story!

lol You're still amazing! (No matter what you say). I love how you write Raven, its so...intune and deep. Love it!

I can't wait for more!

X

O.O! I'm captivated!

You've really captured Malchior's character in this. And I love the whole multiverses thing. It's facinating!

I can't wait for read more of this! I'm truly amazed by the imagination it holds.

You're amazing!

*adds to favs*

X

Wow. You have an intimidating grasp on vocabulary, I'm jealous. The imagery is awe-inspiring and so is Malchior's character (I feel so sympathetic for him - eternal boredom would be horrible). I can't remember ever seeing this take on him and his imprisonment before, and I love it. Can't wait to see if he gets the 'freedom' thing right this time.

I've never been able to do a review without nitpicking, so here's my nitpick.

"Books reorganized themselves on the shelves and thru it all Malchior prostrated himself to the quasi-existing mist."

'thru' is one of those words that only semi-exists. Most of the time, I think it's better to use 'through'. It's not incorrect to use 'thru' (at least I don't think it is) but it's something to consider when writting.

Wow!

It's brilliantly, fantastically...good!

I can't wait to see what happens next!

Oh my goodness! *becomes attached* I love where this is going. Oh Jinx. That Pandora.

~Rose

CONTINUE!