You have a very poetic way with words!

"He enjoyed the feeling, and found himself whispering foreign phrases to her as he placed a kiss ontop of her head."

For some reason that line struck me as incredibly romantic. I loved it!

"I may have missed that day, but every doctor knows not to let someone contagious kiss your open wounds."

Ouch. He so deserved that though. I'm enjoying this so far and really like your writing style. Looking forward to the rest of it.

I hated the songs kinda gay...that was so read porn dude :(

ok its spelled c-o-l-o-r lol

Gees ots like i dont want to read but it sucks me in anyway! I love your story and not for the kissing...

I guess its cool but house is like 20 years older then her