nice.

Well, kinda sad. I'm off to check out the sequel to see if there's anything more... Clois-ish there ;)

Arrugh... Must go read more...

Am I the only one that thinks Lois is being extremely self-centered and spiteful here? Clark CHOOSES to reveal himself to give her a shot at her wish, and her response is, "You should have told me SOONER?" How does that make sense? Her own choices means she has no claim on him. So while Clark owes Jason a lot, I'm not convinced that Clark owes Lois squat. She fell in love with a man she doesn't know (Superman) yet feels the right to be pissed to find out he's a man she chose to belittle and ignore (Clark)?

Don't get me wrong, I'm a Clark/Lois fan. But I don't look at either of them with rose-colored glasses. Neither am I necessarily disagreeing with your characterization of Lois. I just think her behavior isn't nice and I'm not convinced it's justified.

AI! oh my goodness!~ how could she do that to him! It must be tearing him up inside! Clark! it'll be alright! (it better be...) hehe

I definitely understand Lois' feelings. Poor Clark. If only...

Great chapter

Poor Clark - doesn't he have enough to deal with?

PS This is very sneaky making us jump from story to story:)

The man in front of her had the appearance of Clark but he was unrecognizable to her. No, after everything that had just happened she didn’t see Clark Kent anymore. But she didn’t see Superman either. The man standing before her was a stranger." this says it all - anyone would have a hard time dealing with this. Again, well done.

'Mad Dog Lane' definitely comes to mind in this chapter. Poor Clark, every answer just wasn't good enough. I think she should have cooled off a little before she saw him, but not our Lois. She needs answers now! He admitted he made mistakes, but it's just not good enough. Sorry doesn't cut it for her. Oh, well, Clark should steer clear of her for a while. But for how long?

We'll just have to wait and see how much torture she can inflict on our hero. Those kisses didn't fool anyone, especially Richard.

If only, what? (you were Clark instead? hum?)

More, please.

I had a feeling that you were going to take this and merge it with the V-day fic. I really liked that she wanted Clark to take her up, and not Superman. That was very nice. But it does make me feel sorry for Richard in the way that Lois says she wants to start fresh. I'm assuming that Lois and Clark get together, which means sad things for Richard. Sigh... what a mess they've made. I can't wait to see hwo it works out!

I loved it,i cant wait for the third chapter...;)

cool.

It was cute of Clark to say that Lois made him weak, and it was nasty of Lois to kiss Richard before Clark. I'm mad at Lois!

Very nicely written, but i am left hanging on the edge. When can we expect 12-Days-of-Clois.

what? no!

love your storytelling but that ending made me feel absolutely horrible. but i suppose that's a good thing ;) ah! so sad!

i'll defintely check out your valentines day fic now.