Reviews for The vault
Domenico chapter 14 . 10/3/2019
Il capitolo 13 potevi farlo più lungo e continuarlo, invece di interromperlo cosi
Maelaeran chapter 13 . 11/21/2018
'Chobits Crossover'
Okay, that was just fucking horrifying.
I have nothing wrong with people liking transhumanism or cyborg stuff, but that kind of body modification stuff is super high up on my Creep Factor list, right next to spiders.

Poor Ranma and Akane.
I'm assuming there was an accident that killed both of their organic bodies and that Kuno just didn't...eugh...nope, not typing that.

Snippet was interesting I suppose. Vague memories of Chobits were a bit more wholesome than this :P
Maelaeran chapter 11 . 11/21/2018
'Shaking the Foundations'

I love everything about this.
The explanation of Nerima being a testing ground, Tanaka trying to cure Ranma, Wizard Tofu, a Marauder's Era story, Ryouga accidentally breaking into Gringotts, Little Lockhart and Ranma (whose presumably a Muggleborn) being sorted into Slytherin.

Even if you never come back to this, I'm still going to come back to these snippets and re-read them.

Thanks for writing and sharing this to the rest of the world!
Maelaeran chapter 7 . 11/21/2018
'Path of the Force'
Ah, English is truly the Universal Language :P

Fun little snippet, but a pretty dark ending.
aliesterus chapter 15 . 7/26/2018
Despite Synthasia being potentially(eh, only maybe) better than this, I think this is good enough to stand on its own two feet, so I lobby for this fic to be reinstated as its own page again.
More Musher chapter 5 . 7/15/2018
This is a good one, too. Too short, though.
More Musher chapter 2 . 7/15/2018
I would LOVE to see more of this. This is great.
tarrangar chapter 15 . 4/21/2018
What story is it that you deem a better version of this? because this is just amazing.
tarrangar chapter 12 . 4/20/2018
Really wish Ranma had killed the whole Amazon council, would have served them right, should also have killed all who he found out knew about what was done to him, and should have pissed on Mousse and Shampoo's graves.

Of course he shouldn't have done that immediately, need to adjust and everything first, but I wish he would have made that his secret goal.
tarrangar chapter 2 . 4/20/2018
Do you just edit the chapters to add a new page? If yes then that don't seem a very good idea, since it means that we can't see that you have written more of that story.
Gary Go chapter 19 . 4/10/2018
Got some wonderful ideas here.
r.rocha99913 chapter 19 . 3/17/2018
You just, this is...
GAH! Why must you hook me in to these stories so well?! First the Eva fic, which was amazing on its own, and now this?! Come on, man! I find myself simultaneously wanting to punch you in the face for leaving it as is, and wanting to beg you to continue the story.

Keep the stories coming, please. We need more.
Richard Ryley chapter 19 . 3/13/2018
Well, this is an interesting concept. If one of your "pokes" is the fanon that Akane keeps challenging people who defeat her and never tries to get any better, maybe Umi doesn't realize she doesn't have anyone to train her. And Akane's attitude towards Umi wasn't spiteful, she seemed concerned about her. So perhaps there could be a friendship there, assuming Umi can wrap her head around the idea that the person she believes to be her father intended for her to marry Akane.

Umi also reminds me physically of Ukyo, which is who I originally thought she might be. I have also typed her name several times when trying to type Umi here. :D

So what exactly is the connection between Umi and Ranma? Unless he was cursed at seven, it doesn't make sense that the personality transfer would be in any way related to Jusenkyo. So maybe it was a curse of a different sort? Or perhaps a result of the Neko-Ken training? I'll note that Nabiki would not be all that surprised at the idea of a girl claiming to be a boy, since that's what just happened with Ranma. She might consider it too much of a coincidence that Ranma has a curse that turns him into a girl, and a girl who believes herself to be him.

The very idea of a female version of Ranma being the sister of Tatewaki and Kodachi is in and of itself hilarious. It could definitely be interesting.
keichan2 chapter 19 . 3/13/2018
Interesting…
I really wonder what happened!
I would really rove to read more of this!
Compucles chapter 19 . 3/13/2018
Well, this is pretty weird, for lack of a better term. I wonder what happened to poor Ranma (as well as poor Umi, the girl she was originally).

I take it the imposter is Ukyo with a Nannichuan curse? I've actually read another story where Genma and Ukyo pulled a similar stunt after Genma seemingly lost Ranma as a child. Although, in that case, they had the foresight to (initially) lock the curse with the locking ladle while "Ranma" wound up happily engaged to Nabiki.
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