I was a bit confused when the focus on each person would change but it was a beautiful story

You had me worried there for a minute. Good use of suspense and diction. I almost cried. I happened to be listening to a mash-up of Utada Hikaru's Apple and Cinnamon and Ne-Yo's So Sick while I was reading this (stupid idea)so that didn't help. Anyways, great job. It was great.

Would anyone have really known if Atemu came back in the same timeline as GX and 5Ds?

brittney

I usually don't read Puzzleshipping...but, wow. I think you've converted me! This story is...beautiful.

Wow, you have a way with words. Good job! I really like it!

great story

hope you write more like this fic

O.*

kisses

That was extraordinarily cute. :) I loved all the little details you put in there. Very sweet reunion, too. Glad he made it in time. :)

Aw! That was sweet!