loved it!

"Quite a looker, isn't he Yugi? Looks almost exactly like you."
"Grandpa!"
"Could't resist, my boy."

LOL!

Great story!

This was a cute fic. Thanks !

I love this story it would be great to write a sequel i love this story so much :D

*pauses from sevents chapter* YOU LAUGHED?! *crys* aiieeeee atem!

live it so cute

So sweet! I was so worried when Atem died though, good thing he came back to live. Good story!

It would've been cute if Joey endend with Seth X3 cute story. Almost cried when Atem died. ;-)

Misty "haha he painted Atem."
Kira "Story be trippin'"
Candy "SHUT UP AND JUST LEAVE!"
Misty "Candy Raging! Wait Candy where?!"
Renji "You guys are annoying..."
Chase "CANDY AND RENJI GET OUT OF THE REVIEWS! I TOLD YOU ALREADY THAT YOU COULDN'T GET BACK INTO THE REVIEWS AGAIN!"
Misty "Whatever they're having a mood again. Kira you do the honors?"
Kira "Whatever. Great story, great first chapter loved it and all that good stuff."

that was one the many weirdist,cutest,OMGing,i'm gunna kill myself,derping stories i've ever read XD yes i made no sense :3 but i do like the story :3

Great story! mermaid thing was really interesting.

that was great. i cried when i thought atem died. u should write a sequel.

i dont get how even Yugi dosnt understand his own painting

Aw...how sweet. Who ever says it's sappy will get to meet my little friend fisty-chan. Or if they say something worse and their a boy I kick'em where it counts. Where the sun don't shine, where Mother Nature marked them as a boy, where the word "ball" takes on a whole new meaning, where the kiwis are kept, where...whatever you get what I'm saying. Maybe I was a bit graphic with the...uh...you know... Anywayz it was really cute, THE CHAPTER I MEAN! O_o

Great story! I really enjoyed reading it!