Omg all u to people always trippin like if y not gonna finish it then don’t make ur story good bc thats how ppl get mad that u don’t finish it damn

Who am I. Someone that’s afraid to let go ;)

Slave naruto

This is one of those stories that I've already read quite a few times, but I definitely know I'll come back to read again.

Naruto's protectiveness over Hinata is my absolute favorite thing ever3
(...and secretly I wish he'd make out with her more. Or maybe in a burst of courage Hinata initiates it and he's sitting there all stunned before grinning and asking her to do it again)

stupid idea bringing him back, and if orochi can get spies here, SHOULDN'T they have ALREADY got rooted out (pun intended) when they broke in LAST time given the barrier and all?

So is hinata just going to be spending the ENTIRE fic unconscious or something? Because it's quickly getting very old.
The ONLY reason the akutski had for hunting jinchuriki was because they could extract the essence that WAS the bijuu out of the seal, that was what kept the vessels different from the hosts, now that that no longer exists, Itachi's threat becomes mindless bluster. That is NO LONGER possible, as kakashi said "You're too late". All their plans just got FLUSHED down the toilet. (a DECADE and a half of work RUINED by the snake).

Ok, something doesn't sit right here, it takes two weeks and their fastest speed, it would ALSO take two weeks for orochi's team to get there, AFTER taking time to avoid konoha guards (after getting out of konoha), to to mention getting him out (all of which would slow them)... Then there is the time it would take to DO the experiments, so.. what hinata was out FOR AT THE VERY LEAST A MONTH? Does that even sound plausible? No I don't think so, see the problem with the timelines?

please keep this story going its really good.

II'M NOT GIVING UP ON YOU! PLEASE UPDATE SOON

I wished you didn't stop I red the whole story to the end of chapter 11 and I love it, it made me smile :)

please update

orochimaru will pay for doing this to poor naruto.

This is a good story. You should really update

This story is really good. You should update it soon.

awesome more please