Reviews for The Gate to Eternity
Pearl Bramble of Willowbottom chapter 1 . 11/14/2013
This is great, thank you for writing it! Please review my Narnia story!
Rhyme2Reason chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
Wow that was really good!
Skandar-and-Georgie chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
I must admit, a strange story. Yet I liked it - their dreams and then reality. Remembering some old part of themselves with or without Aslan - nice!

FYI: "Susan" is Hebrew for lily (shoshannim), the Easter kind. :D
Bartholo chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
I realy liked the dreams
Bundibird chapter 1 . 7/13/2008
That was different, but i really, really liked it. The dreams were realistic, and they really did portray a likeness of their character.

Susans was definately my favourite. Hers was absolutely perfect and made me want to cry. Ed's was next best, followed by lucy's. Peters i found a bit hard to understand, but that may have been because it was the first cab off the rank and i wasnt quite absorbed into the story. I'm gonna go read his again.

I really, really like your stories!

Love Bundi
Almyra chapter 1 . 2/13/2007
First of all, hurrah, someone else knows Kutless! *dances with joy*

Second, what a lovely, surreal story. I so enjoyed how you blended the book elements with the dreams, making them point to each child's experience and the character traits that make them unique - Peter grasping the rock (oh, love that, absolutely superb!), Susan with her queenly reflection, Edmund _believing_, and Lucy persevering through her doubt.

Great job - I enjoyed this very much!
MooMoogle chapter 1 . 12/30/2006
This...is...beautiful. ;-; -snatches writing skillz- Muahaha.
Elanor Joy chapter 1 . 12/29/2006
I loved Susan's dream, but good lord, was it depressing. Beautifully written, you and C.S. Lewis work well together. Keep it up!
imakeladrygirl chapter 1 . 12/27/2006
That was awesome! I especially like Lucy's, and I do love "Brave". Lovely song. Wonderful job with this fic!
Orious chapter 1 . 12/27/2006
Hey Theo!

Ok, well, I really enjoyed it. But I must say I was a little confizzled, I don't get the point, see? I mean, I relize there emotions, but maybe, could you perhaps PM me and get me straight?

You see, I relize there emotions (did I say that already?) But I'm having trouble with the base, why there having them and do they benifit from it?

Do you understand?

Also, I really liked Lucy's conversation with Aslan. ;-)

Maybe it's just me, but I was confuzzled, I'm sorry. :-(
lastyearslove chapter 1 . 12/27/2006
Oh, this was different, but I really, really enjoyed it.
elecktrum chapter 1 . 12/27/2006
Another excellent story! You never fail to deliver, my dear!

All four dreams were very insightful and very fitting to the dreamer. Peter's, the simplest of the dreams, summed his character up nicely - strong, striving, and one who restores and honors all that is good. I wasn't surprised that Susan couldn't remember her dream. Rather, I was disappointed she didn't. If she had remembered what she was - vibrant, beautiful, gentle - she may not have drifted away from Aslan. Edmund would have to start out in a nightmare, but the progression of his dream nicely reflects his own redemption. And of course Lucy dreamed of Aslan. I loved her glimpse of the Stars falling and how she woke up to sunshine. I bet that would be an interesting morning in the Pevensie household for three of the children, at least!
Ceridwyn chapter 1 . 12/26/2006
This is Ceridwyn speaking. *wink*

I think it's really beautiful! It made me cry, and it has so much meaning! I really don't think there's anything else to say except: I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! Keep writing! *big grin and big hug*
the1hobbit chapter 1 . 12/26/2006
i liked it. :-)

I was wondering why I new some of the text... lol maybe it helps to read a disclaimer FIRST. but what can I say, I get antsy?