I rather like your 'death-eater-lite' story. Obviously, sad what happens to Hermes etc but the interior monologues of Percy as he tries to behave like a DE are excellent.
Thank you.

i like the way all of this ended! the siblings' conversation was really great! i like the story...:-)

i was afraid percy wouldn't get a chance to rescue ron! but he managed and it was good! i wonder though what's going to happen now!

oh great! they had to bring ron, didn't they!
i really felt bad the way Macnair killed Hermes! that was really sad! :-(

Kinda was hoping for Percy to hauntingly tell his siblings to lay off the Snape-bashing in an emotionless, tired voice. Six months have left him emotionally and physically drained . . . full of self-loading, among other things. Snape has been doing this for YEARS.

Overall, I LOVED READING THIS FIC VERY MUCH HOLY CRAP!

Very well-written, but I won't be continuing to read because I can't believe that Dumbledore was still "a hero-figure" to Percy after four years of his youngest siblings' (and once his girlfriend's) near-deaths. Wizards don't have much logic, but I always expect more sense from Percy than the rest of his family.

OMG, these guys never give up, do they?!

i like percy's inner struggles! it's interesting! :-)

interesting chapter! :-)

wow! he got in! i wonder if percy really meant all the things he said.

interesting!

how dare he! that old batard dumblebee! did he knw how much pain percy will surfer!? that old manipulative bastard!

a nice fic about Percy.

This was a great story. Yesterday while I was reading this my mom made me go to bed and finish reading after i came home from school the next day. I nearly died because i needed to know what was gonna happen. This story was sooooooooo dramatic that i couldn't stop reading so i just pretended to go to bed and kept reading. My mom found out and I was grounded (I'm currently in the closet hoping my mom doesn't find out i'm using the computer) but it was totally worth it.

Anyway, I just wanted to say before I started telling you about stuff you probably don't care about that you are an amazing writer and this was an amazing fanfic. I can't wait to read some of your other work. Keep up the good work! :DDDD

poor Hermes, how could you kill him, dont you have a heart, author?