Reviews for The Queen of Norsunder
singinandlovinit chapter 6 . 8/1/2008
awwee please update as soon as you can!
courtingu chapter 6 . 7/30/2008
im so glad you continued, I loved it! The last chapt. was my favorit! O, I do hope youll continue with the story, please do its so good!
Mrs. Dom Masbolle chapter 5 . 2/6/2007
i am glad this story isn't done...i think we need more fluff from danric now that he has mel, maybe tears, definitly promises of never letting her out of a hug...that sort of thing (lol) anywho, i liked this chapter, and i am glad you showed mel's courage. please update soon!
imakeladrygirl chapter 5 . 2/6/2007
This is a great story! Please update soon!
FelSong chapter 5 . 2/5/2007
Is that the end? I kinda liked it actually...though I thought Alani was evil without having a real motive. Then again, that may be because you haven't had the time to flesh everything out.
99x9RedRoses chapter 4 . 1/22/2007
Aw, poor Mel, well it'll grow back. Please update soon!
ducksluvme2 chapter 4 . 1/21/2007
wow this is really good. can't wait for the next one!:)
Mrs. Dom Masbolle chapter 4 . 1/15/2007
good job on this chapter, poor mel, she will probably be brought back to memories of her motehr now that her hair is gone...i like your chaon idea, and i like(i knoe it sounds horrible) but i think it;s sweet that danric is so upset, and also, i liked the part where both knew each other, and that mel understood his decision. please update soon!
FelSong chapter 3 . 1/8/2007
It's getting cool though you could've elaborated on Danric's state of mind. He seemed too calm about the whole affair despite being practical.
Mrs. Dom Masbolle chapter 3 . 1/1/2007
awesome...please update soon!
FelSong chapter 2 . 12/30/2006
Ooh ransom! The oldest trick in the book but evidently very effective in this instance. Keep writing!
PolythenePam80 chapter 2 . 12/28/2006
Your story is really good. I like that you have stuck to the original story with accuracy. Hope you post the next chapter soon!
Mrs. Dom Masbolle chapter 2 . 12/27/2006
oh poor mel and danric...i get what you were saying when you said that it happend fast. Poor danric, he is probably so worried and then having to make such a big decision by himself. PLease update soon...really good chapter.!
starliss-flower chapter 2 . 12/26/2006
I like the storyline a lot! Very interesting, and I want to know more about Queen Alani. Will there be more on how things are in Athaneral later?
Mrs. Dom Masbolle chapter 1 . 12/26/2006
i like where this is going, but i have one thig...isn't mel a mage by now? wouldn't that mean that she can help protect them. Please update soon...and maybe a little more fluff, (makes it sadder when mel gets taken!)