This is the most delightful story! Love it.

God, this is just the cutest thing. I love your casually snarky!Doumeki, and your spazzy!Watanuki is just adorable. That "We can go get ice cream if you want." "I'M NOT FIVE." exchange just killed me. Thanks for making my day!

I loved it.

And the last sentence is just perfect.

Heh, Watanuki hasn't realized yet why Doumeki stays by his side all the time, huh? The boy is so cutely oblivious! But he did notice Doumeki's good looks and his fast beating heart gave him a little push in the right direction... Don't lose hope, Doumeki: you definetely won't stay second best in love for too long. (_~)

"As far as he knew, rivals in love usually didn’t spend so much time together without the apex of said love triangle present." Hahaha! That one made me laugh! Watanuki should really get a clue. XD

this story officially has me hooked on this pairing.

Good. Would have been better if it lead somewhere, it is, it reads like a small part of a bigger story. Half a one shot, if you will. Oh, well.

My absolute FAVORITE xHolic oneshot. Thank you for writing it.

That was nice. Poor Doumeki, Watanuki can be so dense when it comes to him...

Do you really have problems writing from Watanuki's perspective? geh, I have the exact opposite problem, Doumeki is the hardest one to write for me. Watanuki comes easily to me... maybe because I'm a bit like him? I can really relate. U

I've always wondered if one of the reasons Watanuki claims not to like Doumeki is just this reason. That everything seems to come so easy to him, while Watanuki has had to fight for everything. On top of losing his parents. Its a little wonder that Watanuki doesn't have more problems then he does.

Great Job. Very in-character, and I thought you wrote Watanuki very well.

Keep it up.

Aw. Watanuki's so obliviously cute. Good work.

lol

I wonder if Watanuki will ever notice there HAS to be a reason why Doumeki spends so much time with him XD

Great fic btw

Sometimes ya just wanna whack Watanuki in the head...

I love this one ! It is so very cute ! ;)

Wow that was really good. I'm so happy now. What a good mood this put me in _