WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning!
Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental
hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the
staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so
they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the
machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died.
Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on
a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you
and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and
she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste
this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life
will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in your room!
CODE RED J!

I love Varden! I haven't thought about Inverloch for years... Your story was cute and came to nice completion. Thank you :)

You finished it! That was a really cute ending.

Awww, I JUST found Inverloch comic and then the fanfics and I would love to see this finished... even if it's probably impossible and you might not even read this. x3 But if you do, think about it, please? 3

I like. Why don't you have more?

love it!

you turned a simple scene into a really really good read. i love how you use words... especially varden being drunk; he really sounds wasted.

very nice :D

Well, i'm really pleased to see more :) Not much to comment on here. I want more.

Am I greedy then? Yes. Feed me anyway?

- Tinuel

I'm so glad you posted more to this story! This happens to be my favorite Inverloch fanfic of the ones I've read. Update again soon!

aw! I love this! hehe...they're so cute and awkward with each other ; ). Honestly, I don't know what else to say about this. I was overwhelmed by the cuteness.

Please write more Varden and Lei stuff!

OH shnaps

I liked t. When will you have more?

You did amazing in keeping this in Varden's point of view. We saw and heard exactly as he could - which was drunk ;)

But honestly. It's the same concept of people who write within the POV of blind characters. We cant see everything as we would normally. So instead of the barmaids face, or seeing that it Lei that catches him at the end...we just get a hint by teary gold eyes.

Entire writing style is perfect, this flowed amazingly, and now I crave more. More!

~Tinuel

great fic! i always love seeing a new inverloch story. i love how you've made it funny and kinda sad at the same time. i think you've got a nice, original idea and a great writing style, so please write more. i'm curious to see how varden gets himself out of this one ; ).

hey...i definitely tried to leave a review for this story yesterday, but my computer was being stupid and decided to shut down :(

YAY!