Reviews for TwentyEight Days
FusionCore chapter 1 . 1/18/2016
beautiful story thanks a lot for writing this!
Hinjintetsusou chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
aww, kawaii! that was so sad and happy at the same time! lol i really liked it! it made me cry! you put alot of emotion into them and it turned out amazing!
bearchiy chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
That was really sad, and beautiful the time! I especially liked the part, where Leon, Simba and als the others felt, that something was very wrong! I bet the friends of the other worlds could feel it to!

Well done!
isumi 'kivic chapter 1 . 8/28/2007
OMG! THAT"S TO SWEET!KYA!

Why are you always write a very breathtaking fic?

I'm crying, you know... really crying!

“I heard you...just in front of the doors...Your voice reached me.” Sora gasped. “It kept me from moving forward and...and I was able to come back to you Riku...”

At the sound of his name, Riku whirled around to face brown hair and blue eyes. Sora looked just like a dead person should. He looked tired and sickly. But still, his eyes were shining so brightly that Sora just couldn’t be dead.

“It seems I’ll go on...like the ever continuing sky I’m named after...and...” Sora smiled at Riku. “I love you too.”

I LOVE THAT PART!
rebecca chapter 1 . 7/9/2007
that was really sad and a really great fic. Srry to say but Im glad roxas died now he can be with axel and sora with riku. _
iPolkaDot chapter 1 . 1/14/2007
I've never played Kingdom Hearts, but...I don't need to, cause this still is a brilliant piece of writing. Its just so expressive, and the part where the people could feel the pain...it was so sad! T_T

I commend you on this brilliant, awesome, fantastic, expressive, excellent, enjoyable, and pleasant-to-read piece of fanfiction. _
Rikku-Gleeks-Out chapter 1 . 1/8/2007
I just knew you couldn't let him die! Thanks you for not letting him die. Wonderful thought out fic. Very org ficcy.

I liked it a lot and I greatly enjoyed your details.
renAku chapter 1 . 12/26/2006
This reminds me of the movie 28 days... hahah
Kuko-chan chapter 1 . 12/26/2006
Oh, that was so sweet! I was really worried there towards the end! And when everyone across all those worlds starting feeling the pain, I swear my heart hurt too! But it had such a happy ending! Beautifully written!
Nami Nami chapter 1 . 12/25/2006
A Very Good Story! Enjoyed Reading it.
Lalala chapter 1 . 12/25/2006
WAAH! I CRIED! -sniffs!-

Especially in this part:

"All across the galaxy, people whose hearts Sora had touched...They were feeling something terrible. Something terribly sad."

...TT~TT I FELT SO SAD! CAUSE I LOVE SORA! WHEN EVERYONE STARTED TO FEEL SOME SORT OF PAIN...I FELT REALLY SAD!

BUT THANK GOODNESS FOR THE ENDING! x.x Sora's still alive! *grabs a tissue and wipes away the tears* Hehe ; I really liked it. GOOD JOB~!