| Reviews for The Broken One |
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   Kyuubi-Titan chapter 4 . 8/5 No hope of any more? |
| Kyuubi-Titan chapter 3 . 8/5 I think I subscribed to you about qt years ago? Finally getting around the reading this. Dark but interesting. |
| legnaro444 chapter 3 . 4/24/2017 PLEASE FRIEND, continue this magnificent story. |
| truetrue123 chapter 4 . 12/8/2015 Please man make more chater love the story XDDD! |
| Smiling Lemon chapter 4 . 11/28/2015 Dude I had fun please make more! |
| what chapter 4 . 8/2/2015 This entire story seems so forced after the restaurant scene, after that it wasn't worth the read. Go back and rewrite this for everyone's sake. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/29/2015 Kim is a bitch in this fic |
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/9/2014 Pathatic making Bonnie act like a slut |
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/9/2014 Killing Rufus was Notnecessary! ! That was simply Stupid and Unnessary for the sake of drama. Come on now. |
| kriss chapter 4 . 7/30/2014 I dont know what to say |
| lennoxmacduffes chapter 1 . 1/4/2014 woah you need someone to fix all those grammar mistakes, there are far too many of them. This is ugly to read |
| Macke chapter 1 . 8/22/2013 KIM POSSIBLE YOU LYING BITCH, I HOPE YOU BURN PAINFULL IN HELL! |
| You'd better res chapter 4 . 7/2/2013 good story. I can't wait for the rest tho |
| moellerman chapter 4 . 7/17/2011 Well written. A masterpiece. The tension can be felt. Ron continues to walk the Path of Darkness, and eventhough what he has done, there maybe a chance he gets off. Maybe not. However, with all that news I thinks that Kim shall confess to her father about what REALLY happend that night, otherwise you are making her be just what Ron now sees her as. Write more chapters soon, the story is thrilling, exciting and significant |
| Juicedmark chapter 1 . 2/18/2011 great story so far, hope you work on the story again |
