recover on machamp?

But when will ash return home.
please contineu

Orange and purple morality oh my.
i'd almost forgotten about that last dozen paragraphs.

Awesome Story! Can't wait to read the next part.

Few things (that are AWESOME!)

-Kolbind reminded me of Palmont City from the NFS: Carbon game because of the burroughs and Darrel's car & crew. (I was playing the game while reading this)

-I love the opposite dimension. Really great concept and you adapt it very well into the story line!

-Just a great story in general!

5/5 Great Job!

Poor Ashy.

This is good

Im in love~ this story got me hooked and didnt let me go until I finished reading it, keep up the fantastic work

really nice

Nice

Evil Jerks. Greedy Creeps.

u should really consider updateing

This is really good so far:

Moonmage

THIS STORY IS AWESOME

This rules, I love the opposet dimension idea, great work. You're not really going to pair Mysteriuos up with Ash though, are you? -gets a troubled/sad expression on face- Usually pairings ruin a good story... -expression brightens- but maybe you're a good enough writer to pull through. Just make sure you don't just have then jump into bed, and tone down Mysterious's power a bit please. It stinks when a girl/guy does that in a relation ship in the pokemon world, it just doesn't work that well. You're doing great though, I'm sure you'll pull through fine.

Dragonist

oh i luves this update! i want ta read it.