This was great! Poor Dsaldi.

Obi-Wan is so forgiving and noble... It's one of my favorite character traits. You write him really well you know. More stories like these in the future?

I thought this was very good. Great job!

A great story. Very good.

aw this was awsome! obi-wan has no idea what hes in for by forgiving anakin like that every time...

I really, really enjoyed this-I loved your characterizations, and the descriptions were great. Good job! :D

~Hilary

He's a child, not a monster? Boy, If I didn't know where Kenobi grew up-I'd be tempted to ask where he grew up! Children can be some of the cruelest monsters to ever stomp about the planet. BRUCK should have taught him this.