LOL What a fucking joke. I hope your shitty fucking book failed and was abandoned just like this. I can't fucking believe you didn't post that this was abandoned until this last fucking chapter. Go fucking die you stupid fucking bitch.

wait the question is what happened to toru? he/she was alive i am pretty sure and i dont think that person will just back off just like that. also the demon... i think naruto should have been the king of demon realm as 9 tails is the king unless they have chosen a new one, which is very unlikely because i dont believe they can find someone as powerful as kurama.

This is actually a fun idea. Nice Beauty and the Beast spice added to a world of magical super ninjas.

This is pretty annoying to read.. the way you write isn’t bad per se but it feels like it’s just droning on. The atmosphere of the story doesn’t help either, it’s not suspenseful, scary, light or happy.. it’s just heavy. Heavy without any reprieve. That’s never pleasant to read.

Great story.

Couldve spaced the last chapter

The last chapter was a bit lazy but other then that it was fine

It's just the prologue so I am guessing that is why it was short, but that was a nice setup. We got all the information needed without being properly introduced to the main character yet, even better than that you had no noticeable typos or grammatical errors which are so common on this site.

Your writing is also kind of to my liking, not really my style but good nonetheless.

Holy poops, this is an incredible story!

Bwahahahaha I love it! I ship it!

He appears! Yippee!

Ooh, this is quite good! Looking forward to reading more. Naruto has attitude, and you've built up a nice mythology!

Huh.. was this part always in the story because I don't remember it when a first read it WAAAAY back before I made an account.. Oh well, now I'm re-reading it I'm sure it'll be just as good~

This made me remember of a story where Naruto in his (red) chakra form living in the forest like this naruto kills orochimaru and his personal guards (sound 4-5), that were lead by the hokage and the anbu into the forest, using nonstop shadow clones that lasted for a few seconds.

P.S. I forgot the name of the title (and wasn't aware of using fol. And fav. at the time of reading it).

This is a very good story.. and have the potential to be one of the best with this couple like principal. But the en was not an really end.. look like you have this words writed in your book of ideas and you just all the words in the last moment.. i enjoy every chapter until this.. but thankyou for making this.. a sweet fan from Venezuela..