updateeeeeee

This is a very good story so far - I look forward to reading more. :)

holy crap im addicted. update. soooon.

such an amazing story.

I LOVED this story, the writing is amazing. do me a huge favour and keep writing

PLease

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Ah cliffie. :P Grr you.

I'm excited to see where this goes; it's an interesting fic.

I'm a little confused about some parts, like the emotions aren't very clear to me, but that's alright. It all cleared up in the end.

Wouldn't soot make Lily's hair gray? Just a thought.

I enjoy this darker, edgier look at the war. It's definitely true that it can be a big shady gray area. I am curious to see how Peter is going to fit into this, probably even more to know if he is going to betray like in the books (but this is AU so...).

I really like that Lily is shown to be a flawed character, she has strengths and weaknesses that can be exploited.

Love it. Keep it up!

ooh, cliffie! not cool. good story, though. it seems really good and i can't wait to see what happens. update soon! and happy new year!

I like, please update soon! Merry xmas.

Dizrythmia.

dun dun dun!

Original. Dark. Beautiful in some aspects. Update if you can. Kudos.

Really really really good

I really like your stories their so different and this one seems so exciting compared to most please continue!

Emily

ps this is the emily that read Little Lady

Sounds like an interesting storyline, but I'm slightly confused at the moment. That could just be because of the time of night though :P Please update soon.

I've been wanting to read this chapter since it came out, but between work and reviewing books 1-6 before book 7 came out, and then reading book 7, this is the first chance I've had. I'm so glad you're still going on this - I was a little worried for a while, but I can understand you wanting to finish with Little Lady.

You're doing really well with this so far. It's a very intruiging plot you've got going (a little confusing at times, yes, but as long as you keep track of everything you're doing, all your loose ends, it'll turn out excellent). It's not an easy thing to keep track of various characters and plots. But again, if you manage to pull it all together in the end (which I'm sure you will - just keep good notes ;) ) this story will truly be fantastic.

The only problems I've been having are minor editing and proofreading errors. For example, some sentences might need to be worked a little more to get your true intention across - and a story simply flows better the less grammatical errors there are. Now, I'm not picking on you at all, this is just to help you improve your writing (which is the whole point of a review, I believe). Just make sure you give your chapters a thorough look-over before you post (or get someone else to - it's easy for us to pass over our own mistakes, simply because we know what we're trying to say), and you're golden.

Keep writing, and please don't make us wait too long for an update! Cheers.

That was awsome, no FAWSOME! Keep writing, I love it.