Clever story idea! I love the Captain rescuing Maria from Zeller and kicking the toad's ass probably in a fit of jealousy as well as disgust ;) Fab writing!

This is perfect! You're a very talented writer. I love Max saying 'Brigitta notices everything.' and the tense conflict throughout the story between the Captain, Maria and Zeller gives it an added dimension. I always wished Maria had gone to the party in the film, I think your ideas would make for enthralling viewing. Well played.

Loved that line from Max. It's always funny when they're the last to work it out. And the ending. Wow. Just wow.

Go Georg. Zeller needed that smacldown a LOOONG time ago

Great job. I can tell the dress is gorgeous and loved how she gave Zeller a piece of her mind at dinner.
But that cliffie...oh you are cruel

Hooray! That'll teach you, Zeller - you rat!

Woweee!FAB! Go on, Baron von Trapp - break his jaw! Please write another chapter shortly.

Woweeee! That's a rivet! I cheered when Baron von Trapp gave Zeller a smack. You half pray he'll kill Zeller for trying to attack Maria. That's what you get for trying to attack Maria, Zeller, you scumbag!

Woweee! What a thriller. Zeller, you pig! NEVER try to attack Maria - Baron von Trapp will flatten you! She is and always will be his!

I would love to read the rest of this story! Please update soon!

KuteKat133

great story..so far

PLEASE FINISH!

hey! this story is REALLy good! i love all the chemistry between georg and maria, and the change of events. the "herr zeller" scene added to the story, also. please, please, please continue!

this is really good. are you planning on updating anytime soon?

Oh come on why can't anyone finish their thoughts around here!

I adore it now keep going!