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This one is also really good, in hoping that you someday finish this one.

So would his Sage Mode be called Gamagan then?

itachi was like 7 or something when naruto and sasuke were born, what even. and why does everyone use the name kazama arashi for minato ugh. also shikaku not shikato. and everyone is so OOC and the scene transitions have been so awkward. im not feeling this

You say it's a story with Naruto and Hinata but we get maybe a ch, with her total.

dude that's just rape you can't shove your fingers up a girls butt in public lol

why tf do people change it from minato to arashi just why

I just noticed that there is no chapter 19 which I presume would have been the actual fight between the Bijuu and the cleanup from the war since it skipped from the bijuu arguing to Naruto being wasted from alcohol afterwards...

You are really giving your characters the oddest of OoC traits. This chapter almost makes my glad that this particular series got abandoned... Not quite but pretty close.

Naruto and Sasuke barely even reacted about the fact that the one who attacked them during the exam and sealed Naruto showed up acting friendly? o_O

Oh look, its a wild Zabuza! Two of the seven swords get to fight. Too bad this tends to get interrupted or it could have been a very interesting fight.

Certainly not what I expected to happen when the two bijuu faced off. o_O

Also, Hinata is having oddly prophetic dreams while under genjutsu? Other than the crazed Naruto at the end, all of it fits with things she shouldn't know that are currently happening around her...

I really wish you would at least include some translations for your unique jutsus. I get that it is a summoning jutsu and perhaps a representative beast imitating nine tails but having to stop and translate techniques I don't recognize really breaks up the flow. I do like having the japanese sounding name but would it have hurt to do both?

I've been thinking about this for awhile but Haku and Zabuza haven't got any screen time even though they joined Konoha. You think they would have chatted with Naruto or even showed up to watch his fights but nothing. If you hadn't recently mentioned them in Naruto's list of precious people, I'd have thought you completely forgot about them...

Strategist fight went about as expected though I'd thought Kurama would have gotten him while being affected by the shadow to show it wouldn't stop him. I guess this is the more decisive victory though.