oh man, this story is really good, i love it so much

Hmmm...romantic, poetic, full of fluff...I LOVED IT :D

Sigh...

There's only one good way to describe this:

Il est beau

wow...that was so sweet. i really like how u brought out the true jenna and not just the jenna that people see in her because of the game. that's something that a lot of people don't do and often miss the fact that jenna is a kind person and not just some short-tempered girl. and i really like how you have those big words in the story. it makes you sound smart. hahahaha. i'd give you a 5/5 stars if i were to rate it.

Good story. It was interesting how you portrayed Jenna in a way few would do, yet didn't make her seem OOC, given the referances to her percieved nature. It adds a degree of satisfying realism.

The ending bit seems a bit...direct, somehow, but I can't really fault it. Great job.

Cute, great style of writing, reading of your fick gave me a lot fun; thanks;)

I'm REALLY glad now that you cleaned out your hard drive. Loved it.

Oh yes, I do find satisfaction in your writing, beautifully written, to bad it's a one shot.