was wondering where the first story is since i checked the author and got nothing.

Will David Templar ever write another word for this fanfic? I feel like he should finish this wonderful novel :) After 14 years, I'm still wanting to finish this fanfic.

Really loved the Part 1,... read it years back,... too bad EA Eva Fics went down,... (

I love the entire child of love series, and this set it a welcome addition, and I have eagerly awaited for the continuation of this set for years (no joke, I've had these in pdfs on things for like 8 years now or something like that anyway). So when if ever will you produce the next chapter? Or, is it somewhere I just can't find? Any info: Please and thank you

Well, this story is a great sequel to Axel's work, but you should really finish it. Presuming that you're even around at this time. If for any reasons you are unable or don't want to finish this story, you should remove it from FFNet so people don't get their hopes up for no reason. that's my opinion anyway... So PLEASE do something about this.

you need to update your chapter.

Templar wnen are you going to write an other chapter it been 6 years come on i thought ST held the record for the longest time gone with out updating but you take the gold. please update soon i really want to know what will happen next

This is serious I can do that the whole night

ask my girlfriend.

Well, U have benn warned.

Have U abandoned the story?

Well, I hope not it really is as good as the child of love

by Terizaki.

MUHAHAAHAHAAHAAHAAHA!

Go on or I will review 5 times a day!

Great story but UPDATE IT ALLREADY! it's been about 5 years.

This is a cool story. I've read the original story and I loved it. I can't wait for the next chapter.

aww... when would be the next chappie? This is quite good although i still put Axel's writing on top. Keep up the good work!

good,good vary good cant wait for more

DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUDE...where's the next chapter?