You still alive? Still waiting for ReEldest in 2018.

Too much useless texts above and under the real chapter. I won't go further.

So I forgot my pass haha that's why I'm reviewing as a guest ughbut I really wanted to tell youhow much I enjoyed reading this story! It really made me laugh out loud more than once and loolll I love your Durza and Arya so much. Also I loved the "Real Life" story before and after the chapters. they were hilarious and very entertaining. I hope you consider writing that sequel, I found this story to be very addictive and special ;)

Do you know that feeling when you encounter a character that blows your mind so much, that you start obsessing over that character, and get stuck in a downward spiral until you cease functioning altogether?
Your version of Durza. Please, I need more. Help me. Because of this I've been reading Durza fanfiction for days, and none of it is as good as this story. Help. You've turned me into a Durza fan.

Seriously though, this story is amazing. There should be fanfiction written about this fanfiction.

Here's some feedback:
I don't like the bits before and after each chapter as much as I like the actual chapters.
However, I did like it when events happening outside the story corresponded with events inside the story, like when Durza and Arya formed the "random guys" around the same time that they joined forces in the story. And it's funny when the outside characters try to write the story themselves.
What I like most of all is how you make specific changes from the original, and and those changes affect later development of the plot, and lead the story to go on a completely different path from the original. I've read a lot of fanfiction where the author tries to make a change, but they cling too closely to the original, so it loses credibility and and also becomes kinda boring as it's just a rewrite of the original with some extra stuff added every so often. The brilliance of your story is in how you made changes and then you sticked by them. And you have a logical progression of cause to effect. I can't get enough of Durza's story. When I read the bit where Galbatorix reveals the truth to Durza, I was so excited. I was thinking 'oh my gosh this is going to change everything, and cool things are going to happen to the plot, and there's a whole world of new possibilities for this story'. And then cool things DID happen! And it was brilliant!

I love this story so much. Please please please please please write ReEldest soon.

- GalaxyInfinite

"We may be able to reach (check name!) river in a few hours" -oh no...lol i first read this thing almost a decade ago and never noticed that part.

so you consider Durza a major character, over Brom?

This is such a good idea! I'm really annoyed that I didn't think of it first! That always happens to me when I'm writing - if it starts going wrong then I'm stuck until I go back and change it. Keep writing this!

Eragon's hair is brown.

Eragon has brown hair, not blonde.

So funny! I couldn't stop laughing!

no offence but this is to weird

dang you're good...if I didn't know better I'd think you were a published author. Really, not just saying it

Great story! Screw representing the elven people just killed me. Good stuff, marvelous rewriting.

Cool concept! At first, I thought that your...masterpiece...was just going to be another parody(no such thing as to many of those!). Was I wrong! It was amazing! Just the right balance between humor and a very, VERY nice rewrite of, let's face it, a less-than-original story. The intro and outro kept my humor going, and the rest? Awesome! If you're wondering, I am now a Durza\Arya fan. I've always been a M\A fan, so I'm already pretty odd. Oh, and I love alsdssg's parody! So funny! WitchyPixie does something very similar, and just as funny. I would love to see you do an Eldest rewrite. Cut out some of that stupid meditation...and Eragon's infatuation with Arya. I have no account, but I Make an effort to review as the ghost who walks. Another thing that would be an awesome read would be Murtagh's capture and torture...change the fourth book so that Eragon can know how Murtagh feels. I even think that you could be one of the few that could pull off an convincing A\M. So, great read, and I would enjoy more. P.S. I liked how you made Saphy childlike and innocent...not sooooooo wise and all-knowing. Merry Christmas! May jelly beans stud your path, may marshmallows soften your way, may your cookies stay hot and their choco chips melty, and your carmels gooey! Yes, I'm craving candy(and bananas, for an odd lady reason). :) : Hooray for random smileys! And also birdies!

I already know this is going to be good.